Written Capstone Change Project

3. Satisfactory

7.9 points

A THESE PICOT question is presented. The PICOT generally follows the correct format.

THESE ARE THE COMMENTS ON TNE RUBRIC, AND BELOW IS THE INSTRUCTOR COMMENT.

Criteria Comments

The topic was there with the supportive reference however you did not clearly state the PICOT statement with the measurable outcome in the introduction

expand Nursing Intervention assessment

Nursing Intervention

8.9 / 1012345

4. Good

8.9 points

A nursing intervention used to address the problem is presented. A comparison of the nursing intervention to a patient population not currently receiving the nursing intervention, and timeframe needed to implement the change process, are discussed.

Criteria Comments

you needed to add the supportive reference

expand Clinical Problem and Patient Outcome assessment

Clinical Problem and Patient Outcome

8.9 / 1012345

4. Good

8.9 points

The clinical problem and how it can result in a positive patient outcome are presented. Some minor detail is needed for clarity.

Criteria Comments

this needed expanded with the supportive reference

expand PICOT Problem assessment

PICOT Problem

8.9 / 1012345

4. Good

8.9 points

The PICOT problem as it relates to evidence-based solution, nursing intervention, patent care, health care agency, and nursing practice is described. Some minor detail is needed for clarity.

Criteria Comments

the PICOT statement needed to also have a measurable outcome.

expand Thesis Development and Purpose assessment

Thesis Development and Purpose

2.23 / 2.512345

4. Good

2.23 points

Thesis is clear and forecasts the development of the paper. Thesis is descriptive and reflective of the arguments and appropriate to the purpose.

Criteria Comments

this area could have been expanded

expand Argument Logic and Construction assessment

Argument Logic and Construction

1.98 / 2.512345

3. Satisfactory

1.98 points

Argument is orderly but may have a few inconsistencies. The argument presents minimal justification of claims. Argument logically, but not thoroughly, supports the purpose. Sources used are credible. Introduction and conclusion bracket the thesis.

Criteria Comments

you needed to also add the supportive reference

expand Mechanics of Writing (includes spelling, punctuation, grammar, language use) assessment

Mechanics of Writing (includes spelling, punctuation, grammar, language use)

2.23 / 2.512345

4. Good

2.23 points

Prose is largely free of mechanical errors, although a few may be present. A variety of sentence structures and effective figures of speech are used.

Criteria Comments

No comments.

expand Paper Format (use of appropriate style for the major and assignment) assessment

Paper Format (use of appropriate style for the major and assignment)

0.89 / 112345

4. Good

0.89 points

Template is fully used; There are virtually no errors in formatting style.

Criteria Comments

you needed to have a summary conclusion for your paper and the future papers

expand Documentation of Sources assessment

Documentation of Sources

1.34 / 1.512345

4. Good

1.34 points

Sources are documented, as appropriate to assignment and style, and format is mostly correct.

Criteria Comments

the list of references seem to support your to but needed to be use as intext citation throughout y your paper

THIS IS THE INSTRUCTOR COMMENT FROM WEEK 3 PICOT QUESTION

Instructor Comments

The topic was there with the supportive reference however you did not clearly state the PICOT statement with the measurable outcome and the list of references seem to support your to but needed to be use as intext citation throughout y your paper

THIS IS INSTRUCTOR COMMENT FROM WK6 LITERAL REVIEW

Instructor Comments

thanks for your summary of the topic with the supportive reference and  the list of reference seem to support your topic