Essay 7-8 pages

Toni Harris

12/3/2017

Thesis: The rise of new women in Korea, has influenced change in traditional women all over the world, However, the power of man will always surpass woman in power movements.

Primary Source: 미몽 - 죽음의 자장가 Sweet Dream (1936)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tmd_OBPFll8

Secondary Source: Essays on New Women (10 commandments)

Outline

Introduction: Old women’s traditions and the common life of a Korean women. I am interested in this topic because women in America also went through a similar change during this time and I will be discussing the breakthrough of both nations.

Main Body: Discuss the main topics from my primary and secondary source and why these sources defend my thesis statement. I will also incorporate one more outside source to tie in the change in the Americas.

Conclusion: Summary of my writing and why I proved my thesis to be correct.

Final Paper

Korean women have made a transformation from Old to New women. This movement was full of trials and tribulations. Most women in Korea now were unhappy with the middle ground between Old and New women. Old women were housewives and were taught to take care of men, their children and their household. On the other hand, most new women in both Korea and America got the reputation of being “Hookers” or “sinful”.

· Details on how Comfort Women

· Explain women’s suffrage

· Transition into comparing American women’s suffrage

· Old vs New women

· New women vs. Today’s modern women

· Today’s modern women vs men