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TitleSummaries by Candi Jackson
Submission date: 21-Feb-2025 11:11PM (UTC-0600) Submission ID: 2595306335
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Please make the suggested changes before including these in your Introduction/Literature Review. I enjoyed reading this. Elderly care is very important to me, as is child care, the two most vulnerable age categories.
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FINAL GRADE
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TitleSummaries GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
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After Northwestern State University, add:
PSYC 2430 Introduction to Experimental Methodology
Dr. Judy Drago
April 13, 2025
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Put this in italics.
Applied Economics, 54(16),
Also, in your final paper, you do not complete the reference citations in bold font.
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At the end of this sentence, you need to clarify the importance of the loss of revenue because you made an unexpected shift from discussing early death in nursing homes to finances. You might want to say something like, "Though helping the elderly live longer is the goal, the current operational policies seem to be decreasing revenue. Increased revenue should be a secondary incentive to implement policies that promote life quality and longevity.
Or, if the study looked at the cost of services to each resident and is losing revenue because of these costs, then you would address this issue differently, perhaps emphasizing the implementation of more cost-effective treatment and housing policies.
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When I was growing up, some individuals opened up their homes to two or three elderly and took care of them. I'm not sure what this practice was called, but I remember visiting an elderly woman in such a home.
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Croatian Medical Journal, 50(2), 182-188. https://doi.org/10.3325/cmj.2009.50.182
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I think this an important comparison but it should be specific. The quality of of life after a stroke is better treated in a nursing care home because of the stroke. For those that have not had a stroke, longevity may be increase by remaining in one's home, assuming the individual is relatively healthy and active.
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Research on Aging, 40(1), 72-97.
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Italicize the journal name and "22."
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Provide the sample number if noted in the article. Sample size is very important in statistical analysis.
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