Final Draft of Argumentative Research Essay

1) Thesis statement: In defiance of some claims suggesting that elimination gun free zones might have an impact of protecting a lot of children, schools at the same time must be gun free zones to enhance safe spaces for children maintaining their learning environment, mitigating those who use guns with no proper training.

2) Backgrounds.

(a) Topic sentence: The statement gun free zone literally means an area where using or possessing a gun is not allowed and it is found to be a criminal case is found.

(b) Examples with analysis

(i) The act has been in use since 1994

(ii) The act has since been widely used across all schools

(c). in-text citations N/A

3) Section

(a) Topic sentence: The education system has greatly continued to be secure with the establishment of gun free zones.

(b) Examples with analysis

(i) The children environment for learning has been safer and secured as many risks have been reduced.

(ii) Conducive learning and teaching for both children and instructors.

(iii) The related issues which inhibit the students from learning freely have been highly mitigated in the gun free zone act.

(c) In-text citations

(d) Linking sentence: Responding fully on any false opinion concerning gun free zone will help reduce the problem student’s face in schools.

4) Section: Fixing the problem

(a) Topic sentence:

(b) Examples with analysis:

(i)Strengthen laws governing the use of guns.

(ii)Make sure schools are armed so as students fear the consequence.

(iii)Improving the security system of schools so as they detain any form of violence.

(c) In-text citations N/A

(d) Linking sentence: If the gun free zone is going to be fully eliminated and more students in schools enjoy their education with no form of interference, they should compete and fight for safer education for others.

(5) Sections: conclusion

(a) Topic: sentence: just as it is the case while discussing the point of the gun free zone in schools some points might be generated to be opinions and proposals.

(b) Examples with analysis:

(i) Schools have the rights to be secured against any form of mitigation

(ii)Gun free zone act in schools should be adhered to ensure safer schooling.

(c) In-text citations

(d) Linking sentence: If gun free zone will be fully eliminated and more schools enjoy the contusive environment, there will be lee or no violence and mitigation in all schools since the laws will have been well strengthened.

Works Cited

Gehrig, David S. "The Gun-Free School Zones Act: The Shootout over Legislative Findings, the Commerce Clause, and Federalism." Hastings Const. LQ 22 (2014): 179.

Kopel, David B. "Pretend gun-free school zones: A deadly legal fiction." Conn. L. Rev. 42 (2009): 515.

Safra, Seth J. "Amended Gun-Free School Zones Act: Doubt as to Its Constitutionality Remains, The." Duke LJ 50 (2010): 637.