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This is the instructor feedback for del 7. It is 28% of all the del so it carries more weight. Even though as first I said don’t worry about it but I need the points so please review and correct del 7 accordingly. Thanks

Kemah,

Thank you for resubmitting your final deliverable.  I appreciate the additional content and revisions made to improve your overall performance.  I provided updated feedback below the original comments for your review.  You are welcome to resubmit a final time to improve your deliverable

Row 1 = 1: you identified an innovative recommendation with an overview of how this technology is used in practice; however, this does not address how EPIC will support staffing or patient flow.

**UPDATE Row 1 = 2: Well done, you have provided a recommendation to support staffing and patient flow.  You provide a basic explanation and support with current evidence. If you desire to improve your score in this section, provide further research and details to supporting how the technology will improve staffing/patient flow.  For example when you state “This technology does not only help in improving the flow of patients and support the medical staff but also eases the transition of the patient lifetime and survivorship, post-cancer medical care” expand upon this.

Row 2 = 4: You provide a detailed policy for the ethical use of CIS, well-articulated and comprehensive! Nice inclusion of support from the literature

Row 3 = 2: Well selected technology.  You provide a basic explanation about the technology and how it will support patient education and decrease re-admissions.  You have achieved a passing score in this section, if you desire to improve your score, elaborate further in your explanation.

**UPDATE Row 3 = 2: I noticed the changes for this area.  Although your discussion on the chatbots are appreciated, this area can still be further developed based upon the comments above.  For example, when you state “Instead of having to visit the cardiology unit in case the patient has queries, they can inquire from the health chatbot, which will significantly reduce the rate of patient readmission.” Explain how it does this.

Row 4 = 2: You provide a basic explanation of technological security measures that can be taken to protect PHI.  If you would like to increase your score, module 4 chapter reading has more details on technical security measures used to protect PHI

**UPDATE Row 4 = 2: I appreciate the additional content added here, it meets competency.  If you wish to improve, provide more details (go beyond just encryption).  This link should help guide you:  https://www.hhs.gov/hipaa/for-professionals/security/laws-regulations/index.html

Row 5 = 3: The document you shared reflected a formal style throughout. There were no spelling or grammar errors noted, and APA format was used, when appropriate, in the work you submitted. A note on referencing:

For article titles, only the first word of the article title is capitalized, along with first word of a subtitle or proper noun (ex: The future of healthcare in the United States: An overview report). Traditional capitalization is maintained for the Journal Title (ex: American Journal of Nursing)  http://guides.rasmussen.edu/apa/articles   

See example below:

Last Name, initials. (year). Article title: Place here, watch capitalization. Journal Title with Traditional Caps, index number(issue number), pages. Retrieved from url

Also, examine your resources to ensure they are evidence-based.  The best place to find EBP research is through our library.  You want to utilize resources that are peer-reviewed and credible without bias.  Sites such as HealthIT Security and AristaMD are commercial sites that provides information to general public and is not considered scholarly.  I suggest a review of the following link: https://rasmussen.libanswers.com/faq/32400

 A note on placing your citations at the end of your paragraph.  This assumes that the last sentence of your paragraph is your reference and all preceding information is your original thought.  This could lead to issues of improper paraphrasing or unintentional plagiarism.  It is essential that any information you present has a rationale for your position, and that it is supported by evidence correctly.  I have included a link that will assist you with the correct way of incorporating citations to ensure you are meeting scholarly writing standards: http://rasmussen.libanswers.com/faq/32328

Another way to look at this is to incorporate the MEAL method for your paragraph structure.  I encourage you to review the following link as well to assist you with this type of writing:  http://rasmussen.libanswers.com/academics/faq/281919

 **UPDATE Row 5 = 4: changes noted.