Fixing some mistakes

Please do not include ANY of first person pronouns on the paper.

Do not start or end a paragraph with a quote or thought from the resources( it must be started and ended with my own words).

Also, do not include page numbers from the resources Only the last name. for example (Paul). However, I don't see that many quotes on the paper is like thoughts only. Please I also need some quotes on the paper, then react to them after!

I still can see some grammar and punctuation mistakes, please give it a revision.

One last thing is that the introduction seems to be a little long, I guess, if you can take three or four sentences from it then add them to the body essay.

Thank you