Composite Papers for Final
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THINGSTOBEFIXED.docx1. Justification:
· You get the general ideal. Tighten up the discussion and get right to the point for each content heading. Fix the items in the grading rubric (pay attention to all of my comments even if you got full points).
· Critical Thinking: Expand your research list to at least pages. Eliminate sources such as Wikipedia because they are not based on solid research.
· Rationale: Introduce Walmart's Chicken Bite Project early in this paper. Reduce the discussion to just the essential points. This is an intrpraneurial venture that Walmart will undertake to capture market share in the fast food industry. It is not currently a player in the fast food market so this will be a new business unit for them.
· Market: This section should be about the consumer demographics that Walmart will be targeting. Paper does not analyze market for product or service
· Competition: Expand this section by discussing each of the main competitors in more detail. Does not provide key features
Follow the rubric prompt.
2. Implementation – 100 % no changes needed
3. Key Company and Personnel – 100 % (good reference section)
**4. Financial Analyses and Funding – GRADE “F” ***
· I suggest that you leave out the farm and stick with the restaurants. Walmart can own a farm under a different project.
· What is the cost of funding this project? Even if Walmart funds it there is an opportunity cost.
· Critical Thinking: This requires significant supporting reference documents related to this industry, not textbooks. DOES NOT DRAW LOGICAL CONCLUSION
· Financial Analysis: Calculate the NPV and show it in the appendices. Discuss this in the content of the paper. It is crucial to understanding if the project is a positive gain for the investor, even if that is Walmart.
· Analysis Parts: These need to be provided in table format in addition to a discussion. Does not provide a budget, an assessment of assets and liabilities, anticipated sources of funding, and the associated costs of attaining that capital as part of the analysis
· Financial Reports: Please provide all requested financial statements.
5. ASSUMPTION AND CONTINGENCY PLAN – 100 %, BUT IMAGE DID NOT SHOW-
· Corporate Social Responsibility: Embed the image in your word doc (CSR) and then save the word doc before you upload it. The image did not reproduce on this version.
