Persuasive Paper, 1st Draft

While being raised with morals and values will carry you a very long way in life and in business, many believe that you should separate business and personal ethics, however, you really cannot separate the two because having values and morals are extremely healthy, you should never devalue yourself for the sake of a business or cooperation, and personal values will always find its way into business eventually.

{teacher’s remarks}

You are off to a strong start with your thesis. As you work through your research, you may choose to revise your thesis to include some of the evidence based research that you find. Each of the arguments you use in your paper to support your position need to be backed up with scholarly evidence.

Becky