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you can move these to background information and order somewhere in logically... Prof says this is actually background info.
you kept all these at your edited version. it seems you just did some touch-up..
for young professionals and students
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please take into consideration those notes given by prof
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please take into consideration those notes given by prof
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you can delete this portion . As you see, prof says" i already said a lot.
you can use this info and expand the related places.. or delete this.. whatever make the written section well.
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make sure you corrected typoes and complete the misspellings
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make sure you corrected typoes and complete the misspellings
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you deleted this from reference, but you keep it here. Actually there is no any source under UDC flagship repsorts.
I will give you university lists. you can visit their websites check it. which university has dormitory, average cost, how many students stay in the dormitory etc.....
we can use real sources to replace with the current source.... As i said there is no ant valid source under UDC 2018 FLAGSHIP REPORT source...
in this part, i try to explain how amny universities there are in washington dc,
which one has dormitory. whats total students, how many percentage live in dormitory, average dormitory cost... etc....
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YOU DID NOT TAKE OUT....
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this sentence are not completed at yoru written documents.
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YOU DID NOT TAKE OUT....
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MOST IMPORTANT QUESTIONS YOU NEED TO COMPLETE. THATS THE MAIN REASON I SHARED AND SUBMITTED FOR YOU...
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I AM ADDING THE UNIVERSITY LISTS. I WILL SUBMIT UNIVERSITY AVERAGE COST STUDENTS NUMBEERS ETC AS PDF.... YOU CAN USE TO RESPOND THE QUESTIONS. IF YOU NEED MORE INFO TO RESPOND THE QUESTIONS GIVEN BY PROF. YOU CAN SEARCH FROM INTERNET USE SOME OTHER SOURCES...
all those unievrsites listed below are located in WASHINGTON, DC ( DISTRICT OF COLUMBIA,USA )
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1. Univ. of the District of Columbia
2. Howard University
3. Trinity Washington University
4. Gallaudet University
5. American University
6. Catholic University of America-Primary
7. George Washington University
8. Georgetown University
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