You need to write about the items called out in your sketch. The entry is just rambling and does not have a focus. Your journal entry needs to be grammatically correct.
· 1 page without drawing
· 2 APA reference
· Also add the book reference
The book name:
Harwood, B., May, B., & Sherman, C. (2011). Architecture and interior design
· No grammar error
· Your own word
· See the example of the journal
· See the rubric