Literature review
Safwan
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International Homesickne.docx by Safwan M Alhawsawi
Submission date: 03-Apr-2022 03:12AM (UTC-0700) Submission ID: 1800082006 File name: International_Homesickne.docx (23.85K) Word count: 1622 Character count: 9614
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36% SIMILARITY INDEX
30% INTERNET SOURCES
10% PUBLICATIONS
24% STUDENT PAPERS
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International Homesickne.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
www.counseling.org Internet Source
scholarshipsforexcellence.com Internet Source
Submitted to Acknowledge Education Pty Ltd Student Paper
Submitted to British University in Egypt Student Paper
Submitted to University of Worcester Student Paper
www.scirp.org Internet Source
Submitted to University of Arizona Student Paper
www.impossiblepsychservices.com.sg Internet Source
Submitted to London School of Commerce Student Paper
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Submitted to Molloy College Student Paper
www.researchgate.net Internet Source
Şenol Sezer, Nermin Karabacak, Muhammet Narseyitov. "A multidimensional analysis of homesickness based on the perceptions of international students in Turkey: A mixed method study", International Journal of Intercultural Relations, 2021 Publication
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FINAL GRADE
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International Homesickne.docx GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
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This piece of information looks like it came from a source; therefore, you need to cite that source here, using either a (parenthetical) citation.
Choose different words
Try choosing different words here. I know what you're saying, but the point is unclear.
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Missing words?
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This piece of information looks like it came from a source; therefore, you need to cite that source here, using either a (parenthetical) citation.
Wrong Word
wrong word
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"focus on" would work well
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Cite Consistently
Consistently cite:
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Use consistent citations as you incorporate information from sources. Don't worry about having too many citations- worry about having too few!
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Comment 1
Some of the points from sources should be included as quotations. At least one quotation is required in the paper. When you use a complete sentence from a source (or much of a complete sentence), consider including it as a quotation.
Paraphrase too close to the original
This paraphrase too close to the original. It should either be a quote, or your paraphrase should contain more of your own words.
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This piece of information looks like it came from a source; therefore, you need to cite that source here, using either a (parenthetical) citation.
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Paraphrase too close to the original
This paraphrase too close to the original. It should either be a quote, or your paraphrase should contain more of your own words.
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More evaluation of sources
Your commentaries tend to focus on the topic, but in an LR, it is more standard to comment on the strengths/shortcomings of the sources.
Additional Comment
Also, it isn't common in this genre to offer advice using "should". In academic writing, these kinds of statements need to be supported with citations and information from sources.
Paraphrase too close to the original
This paraphrase too close to the original. It should either be a quote, or your paraphrase should contain more of your own words.
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This piece of information looks like it came from a source; therefore, you need to cite that source here, using either a (parenthetical) citation.
Comment 2
If any of these suggestions came from sources, it would be helpful to add a citation to that source. Doing so would lend credibility to your idea.
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