Thanks for your work on this assignment. The biggest challenge in your paper is that you used many words to try and make a particular point, but in doing so, your message got lost. I would like to see you be much more explicit in your writing to help the reader understand your main ideas. Please see comments and example for guidance.
Dr. Guevara
( 1.52 / 2.00) Writes a Reflective Mentoring Philosophy Which is At Least 300 Words
Basic - Writes a limited reflective mentoring philosophy that is between 200 and 250 words. The philosophy is underdeveloped.
Comments:
While your philosophy meets the 300-word requirement, you still needed to address a wider variety of the recommended aspects of mentoring.
( 2.28 / 3.00) Responds to the Required Questions Regarding the Documentation Form Using the Text as Support
Basic - Partially responds to the required questions regarding the documentation form, minimally using the text as support. Relevant details are missing.
Comments:
You suggest some interesting ideas, but more details were needed. Additionally, you did not use the text to support your thinking.
( 0.84 / 1.10) Applied Ethics: Ethical Self-Awareness
Basic - Defines both core beliefs and the origins of the core beliefs.
Comments:
The paper tends to be generic and overgeneralizes situations without recognizing ethical complexities.
( 0.84 / 1.10) Creative Thinking: Connecting, Synthesizing, and Transforming
Basic - Associates ideas or solutions in novel ways.
Comments:
You did not synthesize information in an organized way, which prevents the reader from gaining a clear sense of analysis.
( 0.18 / 0.20) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics
Proficient - Displays comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains only a few minor errors and is mostly easy to understand.
Comments:
Good job! Correct conventions facilitate the reading of the text.
( 0.18 / 0.20) Written Communication: APA Formatting
Proficient - Exhibits APA formatting throughout the paper. However, layout contains a few minor errors.
( 0.20 / 0.20) Written Communication: Page Requirement
Distinguished - The length of the paper is equivalent to the required number of correctly formatted pages.
( 0.20 / 0.20) Written Communication: Resource Requirement
Distinguished - Uses more than the required number of scholarly sources, providing compelling evidence to support ideas. All sources on the reference page are used and cited correctly within the body of the assignment.
Overall Score: 6.24 / 8.00
Overall Grade: 6.24