Need 2 discussion responses done documents & templates listed below
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TemplateWeek4Discussion2RespondtoPeers.docxHow to use this template: To use this template, replace the instructions written in italic font with your own discussion text. Be sure to proofread your work and check it for completeness and accuracy. Delete any extra text/instructions/references that do not apply to your response. Then, copy your work and paste it into the discussion response window in class. At least two of your weekly responses to classmates must fulfill the requirements outlined in the “Respond to Peers” section of the discussion instructions.
You are welcome to add additional conversation after the required elements have been addressed. This template provides the basic requirement for responding to a peer. Please add more and feel free to collaborate with more than two students throughout the learning week.
Week 4, Discussion 2: Respond to Peers
Hello [Name],
After reading your rough draft,I see that… (Here, you should complete a peer review of your classmate’s rough draft. To help ensure that all of your classmates receive feedback, if possible, review at least one draft that has not yet been reviewed. Use the textbook and Ashford Writing Center to ensure you are giving accurate information.)
Your thesis statement … (Here, you should provide your own insights on the thesis statement along with any suggestions for final revision. Is the thesis clear and debatable? Does the thesis appear at the end of the introduction? Is the thesis specific enough or does it attempt to cover more than what is actually discussed in the essay?)
Your topic sentences and body paragraphs … (Here, you should provide your own insights on the topic sentences and body paragraphs along with suggestions for final revision. Is the claim in your thesis statement fully developed and supported throughout your essay? Do your topic sentences support your thesis statement? Have you supported your claims with evidence?)
After looking at your research integration, I see room for more … (Here, you should provide your own insight into how well the research is integrated. Are quotations woven or simply dropped into the essay? Are sources introduced? Are quotations thoroughly discussed?)
When looking for fallacies, I noticed that … (Here, you should discuss any logical fallacies and share suggestions for avoiding fallacies and revising any logical errors. Use the textbook and Ashford Writing Center to ensure you are giving accurate information.)
Your conclusion … (Here, you should share your own thoughts on the concluding paragraph along with any suggestions for final revision. Does the conclusion restate the topic and thesis and explain why they are important? Does it address opposing viewpoints and suggest future research possibilities?)
After reviewing your essay, I have questions about… (Here, you should discuss any specific questions you have regarding your classmate’s essay structure.)
[Your Name]
References
(If you reference the tutorials, textbook, instructor guidance, or handouts – which you should – be sure to cite them in-text and add the references to the end of your post.)
