Weak Resume

First Last Name

San Jose, CA 95118|xxx-xxx-xxxx|[email protected]

OBJECTIVE

Junior San Jose State University Student-Athlete (Sport) pursuing a Bachelor’s of xxxx in xxxxx.  My goal is to find an internship opportunity that allows me to showcase my competitive drive, discipline, exceptional time management and ability to thrive in high-pressure situations. 

EDUCATION

San Jose State University; San Jose, CA                                                                     Expected Graduation Date: May 20xx

· Bachelor of xxx (Arts or Science) in xxxx, x.x GPA (don’t add if it’s under 3.0)  Major GPA

· Student-Athlete

EXPERIENCE

San Jose State Athletics– Student-Athlete, San Jose, CA                        Month 20xxx – Present 

· Dedicated 30+ hours/week of practice, competitions, study hall, recruiting trips, training, and travel while managing a x.xx GPA 

· Earned a starting position as a walk-on, OR scholarship Individual Medley and Breaststroke specialist by committing to 16  years of overcoming failure and executing under pressure 

· Ensured active and effective communication between coaches, support staff, and teammates, resulting in are more team cohesion and wins (this line could coincide with Team Captain title if you are a Team Captain) 

· Earned xxxx award through xxxx

· Awarded All-American status, a specific recognition given to xxxxx 

· Drove accountability and team values across all levels to uphold team standards of excellence in academics and participation 

Care.com, Nanny,  San Jose, CA                                                                                                       Month 20xx - Month 20xx

· Supervised young two children, helped with homework, made dinners, and provided opportunities to explore innovative and exciting social activities 

· Held children accountable for upholding rules and core values set by their parents and learned how to be stern in challenging situations 

Name of Business, Private Swim Lesson Coach,  San Jose, CA                                                 Month 20xx - Month 20xx

· Utilized collegiate platform built from swim camps to create a pipeline for swim lesson candidates

· Observed technique and implemented a strategic lesson plan to improve performance in club swimming competitions

· Communicated with parents to discuss client progress and provide feedback on long-term improvement

VOLUNTEER/SERVICE EXPERIENCE

Sacred Heart – Student Volunteer; San Jose, CA                                                                         Month 20xx - Month 20xx

· Completed 70+ hours of community service over, providing food, transportation, client support, and advocating for fresh foods for community members in need of assistance

· Elevated life vision for 50-60 community members per 3-hour shift through sharing, encouragement, and hands-on support