Duplicate-Disregard

Merger Heuristic:

Great start on this assignment.  I would like to see more content language for each of your criterion rather than just the description of the criterion. Please look at the example for this assignment. Just revise as we progress weekly with this project.

Organizational Snapshot

I like some of the info you noted in this paper. However, you did not follow the instructions for this assignment. The instructions asked that the following to be included in this assignment:  

This week you will research and distill succinct, detailed descriptions of the organizations you’ve chosen for this assignment. These “snapshots” will provide the Board with complete, but not overly detailed, pictures of the organizations that you are analyzing. The snapshots should include a summation/analysis of:

· Their mission/vision/values

· Their for-profit / not-for-profit status

· Organizational history

· Patient ratings

· At least two additional aspects of the organization that you believe the Board will benefit in knowing. These can be:

. Specific historical or ongoing instances of community involvement

. Any news about the organization

. Involvement in any initiatives

. Regional (state, city, county) policies/incentives/initiatives/regulations that are of note

Financial Report

This version is much better. Fewer grammar errors! Also, you need to work on your citation.  You did a better job.

Creditworthiness

This was a great report. You were very thorough in the details and content.Now, I would have liked to read a complete analysis in your final summary. Overall, great paper!