ENG121 Personal-essay draft

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· Jeremy Pilarski

8:53am Jan 5 at 8:53am

Melissa, Strong reasons for going to college in your draft. See if you can expand the idea of setting an example for your children.  What do your children to say to you as you work hard to achieve your degree? Also, what do you say to them?  Add some conversation to your decision to attend college, either internal or external.

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Melissa,

Strong reasons for going to college in your draft. See if you can expand the idea of setting an example for your children.  What do your children to say to you as you work hard to achieve your degree? Also, what do you say to them?  Add some conversation to your decision to attend college, either internal or external.