EBM 502 Assignment 4
also here is the feedback from assignment 2:
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Module: EBM502 Research Methods
Module: 2 Assignment: 2 Due: 06/19/22 Submitted: on time |
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Written assignment: What is the title of your research? Research Aim: Although your research aim is interesting, it could be more focused e.g.: · To investigate how big data is helping healthcare providers make actionable decisions out of the huge amounts of data generated from their daily activities.
Research Questions: Your research questions also need to be more focused e.g.: 1) What issues do healthcare providers face when dealing with the huge amounts of data generated from their daily activities? 2) How does big data help healthcare providers who are dealing with huge amounts of data generated from their daily activities? 3) How can big data be improved to help healthcare providers deal more efficiently with the huge amounts of data generated from their daily activities?
Research Objectives: good.
Literature Review: you were asked to find 8-10 sources of academic literature connected to the work you propose to do and analyze them to show how your research may fill or extend an existing gap. Compare and contrast the sources with each other and with your approach. You found some relevant sources and discussed these in relation to the topic. However, I would like to see more critical analysis, and less descriptive writing. |
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Spelling and Writing Mechanics: Students show working knowledge of proper spelling, grammar, APA formatting, formal citations and referencing. |
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Comments: Your paper was well-written and presented. Good work on your sources and your in-text citing although you must not number your references in the reference list. Other than this, well done! |
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89.75 |