Then you will come up with some policies related to the technical issues you think are associated with their current infrastructure and setup, then standards, and at the end the practices. Please pay attention to the differences between these three, as it also has been mentioned in your assignment's description.
I can see that you are trying to keep these three parts in your paper, but somehow you are not to target with technical parts and issues associated with your organization you have mentioned. Also, I found some typos and formatting mistakes in your paper. Try to use SWS or APA format. You can resubmit for a better grade before next week Monday at 6 pm. Please let me know if you have any questions or problems.