Order 797070: Modern Patterns in World History

Evaluation Results

Requirement: Survey of World History: UYT Task 4

AUTHOR: Kaitlin Galvan

DATE EVALUATED: 02/18/2018 06:27:42 PM (MST)

DRF TEMPLATE: Survey of World History (UG, C375, UYT1-0615)

PROGRAM: Survey of World History (UG, C375, UYT1-0615)

EVALUATION METHOD: Using Rubric

FINAL SCORE

Does not Meet

General comments:

2/18/18 - This thoughtful essay capably discusses the causes of the American Revolution, aptly discussing several factors that led to the Revolution, such as the British imposition of taxes such as the Stamp Act, the Boston Massacre, and the Intolerable Acts. Nationalism is also competently explained as developing during the American Revolution, as an increasing number of Americans were native-born and identified themselves as a political community. Finally, a suitable explanation of the consequences of industrialization is present and ably discusses how those consequences included the development of the factory system, the development of new forms of transportation, such as steamships, and changes in women's position, both in the home and in society. A discussion of the results of the American Revolution could not be discerned in the submission.

Detailed Results

(Rubric used: UYT Task 4 (0615))

ARTICULATION OF RESPONSE (CLARITY, ORGANIZATION, MECHANICS)

0. 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT PRESENT

1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT

2. 2=COMPETENT

The candidate provides unsatisfactory articulation of response.

The candidate provides weak articulation of response.

The candidate provides adequate articulation of response.

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CRITERION SCORE:

2.00

A. CAUSES AND RESULTS OF REVOLUTION

0. 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT PRESENT

1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT

2. 2=COMPETENT

The candidate does not provide a logical discussion of the causes and results of 1 of the given revolutions.

The candidate provides a logical discussion, with insufficient detail, of the causes and results of 1 of the given revolutions.

The candidate provides a logical discussion, with sufficient detail, of the causes and results of 1 of the given revolutions.

CRITERION SCORE:

0.00

COMMENTS ON THIS CRITERION:

2/18/18 - The essay capably discusses the causes of the American Revolution, aptly noting how factors such as the British imposition of taxes, such as the Stamp Act, following the French and Indian War, the Boston Massacre, and the Intolerable Acts, were all important in leading to the conflict with Britain. A discussion of the results of the American Revolution could not be discerned in the submission.

For instruction on the causes and results of the American Revolution, please revisit Unit 6: Modern Patterns in World History, Module 15: The Rise of Nationalism and Political Transformations in the Atlantic World in the study plan for this course by clicking on the link located in the top left in this rubric item's name, Causes and Results of Revolution.

B. DEVELOPMENT OF IDEOLOGY

0. 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT PRESENT

1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT

2. 2=COMPETENT

The candidate does not The candidate provides a The candidate provides a

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provide a logical explanation of the development of 1 of the given ideologies in relation to associated historical events.

logical explanation, with insufficient detail, of the development of 1 of the given ideologies in relation to associated historical events.

logical explanation, with sufficient detail, of the development of 1 of the given ideologies in relation to associated historical events.

CRITERION SCORE:

2.00

C. CONSEQUENCES OF INDUSTRIALIZATION

0. 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT PRESENT

1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT

2. 2=COMPETENT

The candidate does not provide a logical explanation of 3 consequences of industrialization in the nineteenth and twentieth centuries.

The candidate provides a logical explanation, with insufficient detail, of 3 consequences of industrialization in the nineteenth and twentieth centuries.

The candidate provides a logical explanation, with sufficient detail, of 3 consequences of industrialization in the nineteenth and twentieth centuries.

CRITERION SCORE:

2.00

D. SOURCE ACKNOWLEDGEMENT

0. 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT PRESENT

1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT

2. 2=COMPETENT

There is evidence of quoted, paraphrased, or summarized

The candidate provides insufficient

The candidate provides sufficient acknowledgement

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content without acknowledgement of source information in in-text citations and references.

acknowledgement of source information, using in-text citations and references, for quoted, paraphrased, and summarized content.

of source information, using in-text citations and references, for all quoted, paraphrased, and summarized content.

CRITERION SCORE:

2.00

D1. SOURCES

0. 0=UNSATISFACTORY/NOT PRESENT

1. 1=NEEDS IMPROVEMENT

2. 2=COMPETENT

The candidate does not include the given points when providing source references.

The candidate includes the given points, with incomplete or inaccurate information, when providing source references.

The candidate includes the given points, with accurate and complete information, when providing source references.

CRITERION SCORE:

2.00

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