financial mathematics dissertation

1. Sent me the data you use in excel or whatever, the Python code, or other necessary files.

2. Add a table of contents and subdivide the title to make the essay looks well-arranged. Add appendix put some code or tables you think is appropriate in appendix, give the essay a complete framework.

3. This essay doesn’t have enough mathematics like formula or something like that. I am in math school, so the essay should be in mathematical style.

4. The data, data analysis and model building sections are not perfect. The content of the analysis and model construction parts are not enough, I think these parts should be more mathematical. What’s more, the figures and tables are way too few. (You can refer to the sample the model essays given by my school that I sent before)

5. This essay needs integrated process of analysis (including Gaussian distribution and so on, even though I don’t use the result of Gaussian distribution). I think the parameter estimation, maximum likelihood estimation and other methods should be more specific, more professional. And this essay is lack of software application, the use of Python is too few as well. (The supervisor said it needed to use much Python in it).

6. And I didn’t see any test (in statistics), like t-test X2-test and so on.

7. And the conclusion seems to be too short.