Needs to be corrected

Introduction Describes the organization and provides an introduction to the overall Report:

  You are writing this from the perspective of a person who works in the CIO department and you are writing the case for your boss. It should be written in the third person. Please review instructions again regarding the introduction.

What is major back pulling factor? Please review your grammar in this section Strategy How the system will support the organization’s strategy as derived from the case study: Please review your grammar.  Example.. Automated. should automatically

Competitive Advantage Explanation of how the system and its data can be used for competitive advantage:

  This section needs work. I could not understand what you were trying to explain.  Make sure all the info in this section is correct. Does Booz Allen does not have an electronic system?

Strategic Objectives Three objectives derived from Strategic Goals in Case Study with explanation of how new hiring system would help achieve.: The objectives were good, you have to improve on your grammar

Decision-Making Types of decisions supported by the system for each of the three levels of the organization: Take a look at the type of decision that will be made at each level. you did not capture the correct decisions.

Format Uses outline format provided; includes Title Page and Reference Page: Good try on first stage...