Visual Communications

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10/27/2021

Hi Brent,

I enjoyed reading your work for Visual Communications. You've made a good start with your visuals and comments.

Please review my comments on the attached rubric for 10/27/2021 for details about what is still needed to master the project.

Keep up the good work as you address remaining requirements, and feel free to email with any questions you may have.

I look forward to your next submission!

Dan

Rubric Name: COM-30116 Project Rubric

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This table lists criteria and criteria group names in the first column. The first row lists level names and includes scores if the rubric uses a numeric scoring method. You can give feedback on each criterion by tabbing to the add feedback buttons in the table.Rubric Criteria

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Describes the visual communication tools and technology used to create each visual

1 point

0 points

Score of Describes the visual communication tools and technology used to create each visual,1 / 1Criterion score has been overridden

Justifies each selection of the visual communication-related tools and technology used to create the visuals, considering why it is appropriate for achieving the project goal

1 point

0 points

Score of Justifies each selection of the visual communication-related tools and technology used to create the visuals, considering why it is appropriate for achieving the project goal,1 / 1Criterion score has been overridden

Identifies the appropriate delivery method for each visual

1 point

0 points

Score of Identifies the appropriate delivery method for each visual,1 / 1Criterion score has been overridden

Briefly explains reasoning for using each delivery method in regard to the organization and its audience

1 point

0 points

Score of Briefly explains reasoning for using each delivery method in regard to the organization and its audience,1 / 1Criterion score has been overridden

Cr Uses the selected technologies to create two visuals that align to the project goal and includes one or more images of each visual in the storyboard-style outline section of the creative brief to the director

1 point

0 points

Score of Cr Uses the selected technologies to create two visuals that align to the project goal and includes one or more images of each visual in the storyboard-style outline section of the creative brief to the director,0 / 1Criterion score has been overridden

Criterion Feedback

10/27/2021:  Good job with the design of your visuals and you've improved somewhat on your descriptions, but go a bit further to explain in more detail about the design choices you made and why you made them. Why those colors and fonts and images and backgrounds in each visual? In what ways do your choices connect with the organization and its mission?  What you have so far is good, but take another pass at this to provide more depth to your comments.

Clearly conveys meaning with correct grammar, sentence structure, and spelling; shows understanding of audience and purpose

1 point

0 points

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Lists sources where needed using citation methods with no major errors

1 point

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Score of Lists sources where needed using citation methods with no major errors,0 / 1Criterion score has been overridden

Criterion Feedback

10/27/2021:  You've made a good start with your sources.  Be sure to cite all sources used for information, ideas, etc., for your work (such as the information about the tools used to create your visuals, and the mission statement for your organization. Use both in-text citations within the template and also provide references that correspond with the citations. Use the CfA Citation Guide link in the Supporting Materials section on the Project Instructions page for help with citing sources. That link will also give you access to the Citation Generator, which can help you create your in-text citations and references.