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Thanks so much for your efforts in the week 3 assignment which is an individual legal research paper. We provided you with a listing of topics that you could select from all the way from medical marijuana to the investment laws of your state or you could have chosen your own topic if you so wish. As with every paper we require that you properly formatted and properly cite and reference the work. In this paper we need to see and Introduction, background about the topic selected and why it was selected. Also, please know that this is related to the week five submission.  We also require a Literature Review which identifies information that is already known about a research topic.  For this assignment you are required to locate two scholarly articles related to your topic.  We then require that you perform research on the Laws and Regulations and analyze one law or regulation related to the topic you selected and to summarize the information about the law or regulation you found and explain how it applies to your topic.   We also require that you find case law at least one published case (lawsuit) that is related to the topic you selected and to summarize the case in your own words and explain how it is related to your topic.  Provide a summary that includes the name of the case, state or federal court, issue, summary of events and ruling.  Explain whether you agree or disagree with the court’s decision. We would then like to see some type of conclusion or wrap-up statement to your 4 to 6-page paper about this topic. As always APA formatting is required as is full citation and referencing of all the information as well as a separate cover page and a separate page for references.  Overall you have done some excellent work here you have performed all the tasks that were asked of you and provided a great overview of the laws the casework as well as your thoughts on the outcome of these cases. You’ve done some good analysis and provided an excellent overview of the intricacies of this legal issue, but we were seeking a bit more depth to the analysis where you truly look at both sides of the issues before truly settling on a solution or conclusion. So, you did lose a few points on the various sections of the rubrics but overall you have done some great work. The work seems to be well cited in some sections of this paper, but other sections seem to be lacking full citation and references, so you did lose a few points.  The other issue is that you have not fully formatted this paper according to APA, APA formatting requires that we use a separate title page a separate reference page a separate introduction a separate conclusion as well as headers and titles throughout the entire paper to separate each section of the paper overall you did well but some of these elements are missing from your paper. Overall you have done some good work on this paper please see the rubrics and if you have any questions or would like me to go over this in more depth please let me know.