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English 102

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Thesis – My mother has taught me many key values and morals that have helped me successfully achieve my goals and find happiness in life.

1. (P) My mother was always present to motivate and make sure that I put for the necessary hard work to succeed in my academics.

· (I) Working hard is important to achieving what you most want in life

· (E) Elementary- wanting to give up because I didn’t feel like doing homework, mom stood next to me at the desk until I finally just sat down and did the work

· (S) Mom encouraged me to work even when I didn’t want to/the work was boring, lead to strong work ethic I have today

2. (P) Kindness – (TS not well done in that it only gives a ‘topic’ for the paragraph…)

· (I) Mother is one of kindest people I know, passed that trait/value onto me, try to be as caring as she is

· (E) Annoying kids when she volunteers at school, she is patient with them and takes time to listen and tries her best to understand what they’re saying

· (S) Mom has taught me kindness even in times when people are difficult to deal with

3. (P) My mother taught me that the definition of being woman is much more diverse than the narrow expectations shown in the media.

· (I) It can be difficult for young women to deal with criticism -> esp. about appearance -> need to stand up for yourself when people pick on something about you that you like about yourself

· (E) In second grade when I wore light-up Spiderman shoes to school and was criticized by my female classmates, came home and told my mom about it and she told me not to listen to them and wear the shoes if I wanted to… I did and now my love for superheroes has evolved to part of my personality

· (S) It is important for all women to know -> if you let someone else influence your choices without really considering them yourself, you will never really be your own person