ARGUMENTATION Research paper AND ANNOTATED BIBLOGRAPY
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Student Research Paper
Professor Griffin
English 1302
November 18, 2019
The Broken System of Nursing Homes
Elderly care has become a huge issue to the U.S population, not only becoming a
financially conflicting matter but an ethics and safety conflict. As time goes on, nursing homes
continue to struggle with incessant problems that seem to not have an end. As young people
continue to age and grow into adults, they suddenly become more aware of their possible aging
and what they will do at that stage in their lives. Aging in the United States has changed over
time and will keep changing according to increasing population and financial status, so everyone
has to become aware of the continuous change in the U.S elderly care system. Elderly care in the
United States continues to deteriorate throughout the whole country for many reasons like a
scarcity in money that is the root of the copious amount of issues in these facilities. The picture
of elderly care in Welty’s short story “A Visit of Charity” is one of neglect and abandonment.
Over time this has become an accurate representation of what elderly care in the United States
has become day by day with the aging of America.
Nursing homes in the United States have gone through several changes, but some of the
most prominent changes pertain to hygiene related, safety hazard, and patient abuse violations. In
Welty’s short story, the reader is shown various images of an overall uncomfortable and
unhygienic environment. Welty depicts this nursing home as an environment of hazard and
unsanitary practice. “There was loose, bulging linoleum on the floor. [Marian] felt as if she were
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walking on the waves” (Welty 150). In cases like these, Environmental Health Specialists (EHS),
are set to conduct inspections throughout various nursing facilities and document any code
violations. These violations are then categorized into two main categories, these being structural
and hygiene related, or at times both can be reported in a single facility. “Structural violations
were defined as facility changes… (such as) replacing carpet, repairing walls, replacing furniture
or design issues” (Avery 16). In this case the “bulging linoleum floors” (Welty 150) would be
considered a structural violation that would be documented in the facility because of the
hazardous conditions they present. In Welty’s short story, one is also shown a scenario of a
hygiene-related violation. “There was a smell in the hall like the interior of a clock” (Welty 150),
which the reader may presume is a result of poor hygiene practice in the nursing facility. There
are multiple indications of poor hygiene and incorrect practices in Eudora Welty’s short story.
The room in which the old women resided “had altogether too much furniture. [And] everything
smelled wet” (Welty 151). These are clear examples of poor hygiene and weak structural
practices in the short story which is likewise evident in nursing home neglect has become
another big portion of the faults in the elderly care system in the United States. Patients in these
nursing homes should be “provide[d] goods and services to avoid physical harm, pain, mental
anguish, or emotional distress” (Pitman 139); yet, in Welty’s story nursing home, patients are
not provided optimum care. Nursing home abuse, whether it be emotional or physical is
something that should not be tolerated in any nursing home facility. In Welty’s short story
“[Marian] is suddenly propelled by the strong, impatient arm of the nurse,” (151) and the nurse
represents one who lacks patience, which can lead to inadequate patient care, eventually being a
gateway to future patient abuse. Abuse in nursing homes is becoming a prominent issue in many
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nursing home facilities along with various neglect cases. These cases are often a problem
correlated with inadequate environment and staffing in the facilities.
When situations of abuse and neglect come to light there has to be a way to handle these
issues, so that is why Tort law and neglect litigation have become key elements in the elderly
care system. In Welty’s short story, her readers are shown the lack of care and attention some of
these patients go through in nursing home facilities. In the short story the nurse running the front
desk of the facility seems highly uninterested and “paid no attention” (150) to her surroundings
or her patients. “In the past litigation [claims] typically involved discrete negligent acts by an
unidentifiable person” (Hoey 161). As time progresses these facilities undergo change and cases
of abuse and neglect have become more prevalent. Often cases are kept in the shadows and there
is not much legal action taken, which essentially abstains the families of the patient from
receiving justice of any sort. In some instances, nursing homes ploy against patients in order to
constrain them from taking any legal action, making it impossible for patients to sue nursing
facilities. In many cases “mandatory predispute arbitration clauses often bar a resident from
bringing lawsuits against a nursing home” (Hoey 162), which means that they take the patient’s
right away to report or file any claims against the facility. The change in nursing homes’
environment has made nursing homes a more susceptible place for neglect cases, which is often
caused by understaffing, or a lack of resources. In the short story, the inattentive “nurse [who]
was reading ‘Field & Stream’ at her desk” (Welty), was not providing the most favorable care
for her patients because she was too busy reading a book rather than caring for her patients at the
facility. In the short story it is only mentioned there being one nurse working the circulating
desk, which is usually a big red flag indicating workplace understaffing. “Studies show that 90
percent of skilled nursing facilities are routinely understaffed, which has direct correlation with
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patient neglect” (Hoey 168). Often these minor neglect cases begin to develop into more serious
cases of abuse towards patients and even workplace staff at times. As these patient neglect cases
continue to carry on, which is common, in most of these cases “litigation is often the only
effective method of recovery available to victims and their families.” (Hoey 170).
Politics has become a huge and essential part of how our healthcare system works. These
have total control over the funding of the elderly care facilities. If the Federal government
decides to cut down on funding, then state governments have no choice but to cut down on
elderly care facilities expenses as well, whether that means cutting down on staff or medical
supplies. In Welty’s short story the reader is shown a disregarded facility, which the reader can
only assume is because of a lack of funding and resources. But not only is this an issue for the
current elderly population, this will soon become an issue to individuals who will require these
facilities in the future. The Medical Trust Fund has been an ongoing concern in the eyes of many
Americans, but the main concern is essentially running out of this much needed resource.
“Although the Medical Trust Fund has declared the solvency of the trust fund until 2015… there
is abiding interest in emerging health care needs and issues” (Takamura 233). The need for
medical funding has increased due to the highly increasing population in the United States.
“Although the percentage of older adults in the United States has tripled since 1900, the elderly
population is expected to double [by year] 2030” (Takamura 234). This ongoing concern of
whether these resources will become scarce should also be a worry for the future elderly
populations. “It is [also] predicted that nearly 40 percent of all adults will enter a nursing home at
some point in their lives” (Hoey 168), meaning that a large majority of U.S citizens will enter a
nursing home during their elderly life. In the short story “[Marian]… wondered for a moment as
though there was nothing else in the world to wonder about” (Welty 153), at this moment in the
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story Marian becomes aware of the possible consequences that aging will bring her. Just like
Marian, many Americans will one day become aware of their aging and become concerned for
their possible retirement and care. Yet medical spending will differ from state to state, but some
states will choose to cut the spending because they deem other expenses more essential than
those regarding healthcare and elderly care at that. “The Medicaid budget competes with other
state spending priorities, such as education, pensions, and welfare” (Blankart 171). In Welty’s
short story the reader can see one of the older women cry and whine to Marian “have you a
penny to spare for a poor old woman that’s not got anything of her own? —not a penny for
candy — not a thing! Little girl, just a nickel- a penny” (154). This pleading by the nursing home
resident to Marian seems to show how much need and despair some of these patients experience
because of a lack of money and resources. “U.S health care expenditures represent a substantial
portion of public spending and are therefore likely to be affected by partisan political control”
(Blankart 171). Although the Federal government has a huge influence over the percentage of
Medicare spending, the state government is who will have a final say as to who is eligible and
can receive certain benefits and reimbursements. Medicaid is a joint federal-state program that is
administered by the states “with increasing state discretion… state governments are now the
most important decision makers with regard to eligibility” (Blankart 173) meaning that states are
the ones who influence major decisions.
As in Welty’s short story “A Visit of Charity,” there is plenty of room for improvement
in care facilities for elderly in the United States. As the population ages, and more people
become dependent on the services of nursing homes, particularly those which are not private pay,
the issue of care for the elderly demands more attention. Welty’s short story paints an accurate
image of what many nursing home facilities have become over the years. These facilities should
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be a safe home for those who are in need of care because of their old age. The problems of abuse,
neglect, malpractice, and hygiene violations which have been documented should be fixed, even
if it means increasing the budget for Medicare and Social Security at a Federal level. Elderly care
is not only a problem just for those who are currently receiving these services; rather, care for
this segment of the population represents a problem for all people, because most everyone will
one day become old or have a family member who ages, especially with expanding longevity.
Most people will likely one day need the services of nursing home facilities, which is why the
demand should be made to enhance immediately the resources necessary for appropriate care for
the burgeoning elderly population.
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