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NOTE

Sources name

pages

Introduction

You have here to start with (SUSTAINABILITY) and how its develop to create (PROSPERITY) , from the past to current time, you already wrote from source (State of the world PAGES 9,15,35) but its still not clear need to use this new source

SDG Goal 11 Monitoring Framework

14,15,16,17

CPI Framework added features

This section you added but my proff ask me for more information that related to the features here

CPI_2015 Global City Report.compressed

?you don’t mentioned the pages

Describe prosperity dimensions and its indicators

(mention example from the world for each indicators)

They are 6 dimension not 5.. (GOVERNANCE) missing here.. you already wrote about the 5 and just you want to write about the sixth from this source (AS SAME AS WHAT YOU WROTE BEFORE)

CPI METADATA.2016

115

How to measure the prosperity

Here, you have to write in details (the subdimension and indicators for each main dimensions) … Like in page 19 its talk about the PRODUCTIVITY INDEX which is one of prosperity dimensions and there is a table contain sub and indicators through them the productivity for any place could be measured.. mention them and the math process that mentioned under the table with full description

CPI METADATA.2016

6, only19, only33&34, only61&62, only85&86, only101&102, only115&116

Prosperity classification index

Here you mention that its classified from 0 to 100 from solid to weak,… I want you here to add a specific part that describe the graph (here in left<<<) of index for any case and through it we could now the situation for all dimensions in any case (describe and how ot define …..)

CPI_Brochure

And

The State of Saudi Cities Report 2016_ Draft

8

18

Prosperity in Saudi Arabia and its 2030 vision

Check these pages and write more in details

CPI_2015 Global City Report.compressed

32

Also, use this new source.. check its pages and talk about the top cities and down cities in prosperity index((MAKE COMPRESION))… (important to mention the table left page 18 and figure in bottom of page 18)

The State of Saudi Cities Report 2016_ Draft

17,18 and 19