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As same as what u did with Prosperity paper, ADD a new section under Sustainable Development in Saudi Arabia Heading called National transformation program

This program created to achieve the vision2030, talk about and how its related to the vision2030, THEN it cover the strategic objectives for 24 ministries in Saudi Arabia, from your opinion mentions the STRATIGIC OBJECTIVES for each ministry that could be helpful to achive the idea of SDG in SAUDI ARABIA.

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ADD a new section under Goal 11: Sustainable cities and communities in Saudi Arabia Heading, write about case study that related to SDG’s idea and how it applied locally.

Because this section is related to my specialist so it’s important to focus more on it. Here, write about a local case study that related to ((GOAL11, Make cities sustainable, resilient and inclusive)) in SAUDI ARABIA, and at the end of it analyses it (is it success?, What is important of it, how it could be better, relate it to the idea of urban planning….)

U already have its sources, u mentioned it in the structure that u sent it to me before. Choose the best and write about it.

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*** Be sure that all paragraphs are connected to each other. Nothing appear surprisal. Have to be preface everything.