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Shane Haley

1:20 AM (15 hours ago)

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Redha,

I think you're off to a great start. Your work is very organized and polished already which is great. Right now we are still in the drafting stage, so you do not need the cover page or the table or contents.This is because we will be combining all of our work together in the future. You should copy & paste pages 3-7 into our google doc so that everyone else has access to your work as well.

In general all your information is good, and I especially like the section about Intels trade facilitation policy that talks about their supply chain, and I would encourage you to expand on that furter. However, below is the quoted instructions for the project about "public policy" from the syllabus, and while I think you have provided lots of information, I don't see much specifically addressing the prompt about Intels involvement in the political sense.

"Public policy (its involvement in the political process through lobbying and political contributions)"

Your first paragraph touches on this topic lightly, but is very general and does not provide enough SPECIFIC information about Intels public policies. This is the area I think you should focus on expanding the most. Other than that there are a few grammatical errors that are no big deal, and we will fix those as we begin to edit everyone's individual work into one big paper. The good news is you're getting this done early so there's plenty of time to continue working. Great job, and lastly I've provided a list of the deadlines our group has set for each other so you're aware of them

Deadlines:

-Nov 26th: Everyone has added their (roughly) 3 pages of information on their specific topic to the google document

-Dec 10th: Paper as close finalized as possible, and group begins to practice for group presentation

-Dec 17th: Presentation is given, and final paper is submitted

Keep up the good work,

Shane