Self Critique Assignment in 12 hours
Overview
You will submit one self-critique of your own presentation.
Objectives
· TSWBAT analyze texts (written, oral, and visual) using the concepts of the rhetorical triangle and Toulmin argumentation.
· TSWBAT define and discuss key concepts relevant to public speaking including Monroe’s Motivated Sequence.
· TSWBAT prepare self-critique, responding to both content and delivery of presentations.
· TSWBAT understand and apply knowledge of the ways in which non-verbal communication is a key part of persuasive speaking.
· TSWBAT identify elements of own dialect and own vocal qualities.
· TSWBAT analyze oral texts using the concepts of the rhetorical triangle, Toulmin argumentation, and Monroe’s Motivated Sequence.
· TSWBAT respond to speeches with thoughtful questions.
Some things to consider and comment on:
· Body language (what you meant versus what you “said”)
· Movement and gestures
· Use of “fillers” (um, uh, like, ya know…)
· Voice (tone, pitch, volume, etc.)
· Audience response (did you miss important cues?)
· Content (did you include everything you needed to include? Did you forget a large part?)
· Time (were you over or under the requirement?)
· Would more rehearsals have solved any of your issues?
Refer to Language Awareness Chapter 2 for help with writing a college essay. Include an introduction, body, and conclusion, and don’t forget to state and develop your thesis statement.
Critique Outline
Introduction
Attention Getter: Student’s name, topic, and date he or she presented.
Background: Brief summary of student’s speech
Thesis statement: Three areas of critique
Body 1
Claim: Critique 1
Support: Evidence from speech to support critique 1
Analysis: How did this affect the speech as a whole? Have you seen improvement in this area?
Transition: Signal a move from this critique to the next critique.
Body 2
Claim: Critique 2
Support: Evidence from speech to support critique 2
Analysis: How did this affect the speech as a whole? Have you seen improvement in this area?
Transition: Signal a move from this critique to the next critique.
Body 3
Claim: Critique 3
Support: Evidence from speech to support critique 3
Analysis: How did this affect the speech as a whole? Have you seen improvement in this area?
Conclusion
Restated Thesis: What three areas did you critique? Use past tense.
Summary: Summarize three critiques and focus mainly on analysis summary.
Action Step: What should the student work on? Make at least one actionable suggestion.
Formatting and Mechanics Notes: