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2nd Attempt: Persuasive Letter

Summary

Want to brag about the revisions you've made to this draft?

Submit an OPTIONAL reflection at the end of your revised draft.

Suggestions on what to include in your reflection:

1.     What draft are you presently submitting?

2.     What feedback were you previously given?

3.     What modifications to your writing did you make? (Consider the rubric’s criterion: Intro/ thesis  or  claim , details and essay development, closing,  language  &  style , punctuation & capitalization, attention to directions & formatting.)

2nd Attempt: Compare/Contrast

Summary

Want to brag about the revisions you've made to this draft?

Submit an OPTIONAL reflection at the end of your revised draft.

Suggestions on what to include in your reflection:

1.     What draft are you presently submitting?

2.     What feedback were you previously given?

3.     What modifications to your writing did you make? (Consider the rubric’s criterion: Intro/ thesis  or  claim , details and essay development, closing,  language  &  style , punctuation & capitalization, attention to directions & formatting.)