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Name: Assignment 2: Scene Descriptions – Narrative and Split-Column Grading Rubric

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Narrative Scene 1: Interior Day

Points:7 (7.00%)

Points Range:7 (7.00%) - 7 (7.00%)

action, not dialogue Scene describes where action takes place with “Goldilocks rule” Scene describes characters who appear for first time with “Goldilocks rule” 1 character performs 1 action in scene that reveals something about the character 1 character speaks 1 line of dialogue that reveals something about the character Scene ends with action, not dialogue

Points Range:6 (6.00%) - 6 (6.00%)

5 of 6 elements present

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 5 (5.00%)

1-4 elements present

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

The requirements are missing.

Narrative Scene 2: Exterior Day Descriptions

Points:7 (7.00%)

Points Range:7 (7.00%) - 7 (7.00%)

action, not dialogue Scene describes where action takes place with “Goldilocks rule” Scene describes characters who appear for first time with “Goldilocks rule” 1 character performs 1 action in scene that reveals something about the character 1 character speaks 1 line of dialogue that reveals something about the character Scene ends with action, not dialogue

Points Range:6 (6.00%) - 6 (6.00%)

5 of 6 elements present

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 5 (5.00%)

1-4 elements present

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

The requirements are missing.

Narrative Scene 3: Interior Night

Points:7 (7.00%)

Points Range:7 (7.00%) - 7 (7.00%)

action, not dialogue Scene describes where action takes place with “Goldilocks rule” Scene describes characters who appear for first time with “Goldilocks rule” 1 character performs 1 action in scene that reveals something about the character 1 character speaks 1 line of dialogue that reveals something about the character Scene ends with action, not dialogue

Points Range:6 (6.00%) - 6 (6.00%)

5 of 6 elements present

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 5 (5.00%)

1-4 elements present

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

The requirements are missing.

Narrative Scene 4: Exterior Night

Points:7 (7.00%)

Points Range:7 (7.00%) - 7 (7.00%)

action, not dialogue Scene describes where action takes place with “Goldilocks rule” Scene describes characters who appear for first time with “Goldilocks rule” 1 character performs 1 action in scene that reveals something about the character 1 character speaks 1 line of dialogue that reveals something about the character Scene ends with action, not dialogue

Points Range:6 (6.00%) - 6 (6.00%)

5 of 6 elements present

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 5 (5.00%)

1-4 elements present

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

The requirements are missing.

Narrative Story In Script

Points Range:7 (7.00%) - 7 (7.00%)

SCRIPT IS PROPERLY FORMATTED Script uses 1 character from column A Script uses 1 character from column B Script tells story with beginning, middle, and end Story presents product positively

Points Range:6 (6.00%) - 6 (6.00%)

SCRIPT IS PROPERLY FORMATTED and 3 of 4 OTHER elements present

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 5 (5.00%)

SCRIPT IS PROPERLY FORMATTED and 1-2 of 4 OTHER elements present

Points:0 (0.00%)

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

The requirements are missing OR THE SCRIPT IS NOT PROPERLY FORMATTED.

Split Column Scene 1: Interior Day

Points:7 (7.00%)

Points Range:7 (7.00%) - 7 (7.00%)

action, not dialogue Scene describes where action takes place with “Goldilocks rule” Scene describes characters who appear for first time with “Goldilocks rule” 1 character performs 1 action in scene that reveals something about the character 1 character speaks 1 line of dialogue that reveals something about the character Scene ends with action, not dialogue

Points Range:6 (6.00%) - 6 (6.00%)

5 of 6 elements present

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 5 (5.00%)

1-4 elements present

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

The requirements are missing.

Split Column Scene 2: Exterior Day

Points:7 (7.00%)

Points Range:7 (7.00%) - 7 (7.00%)

action, not dialogue Scene describes where action takes place with “Goldilocks rule” Scene describes characters who appear for first time with “Goldilocks rule” 1 character performs 1 action in scene that reveals something about the character 1 character speaks 1 line of dialogue that reveals something about the character Scene ends with action, not dialogue

Points Range:6 (6.00%) - 6 (6.00%)

5 of 6 elements present

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 5 (5.00%)

1-4 elements present

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

The requirements are missing.

Split Column Scene 3: Interior Night

Points:7 (7.00%)

Points Range:7 (7.00%) - 7 (7.00%)

action, not dialogue Scene describes where action takes place with “Goldilocks rule” Scene describes characters who appear for first time with “Goldilocks rule” 1 character performs 1 action in scene that reveals something about the character 1 character speaks 1 line of dialogue that reveals something about the character Scene ends with action, not dialogue

Points Range:6 (6.00%) - 6 (6.00%)

5 of 6 elements present

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 5 (5.00%)

1-4 elements present

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

The requirements are missing.

Split Column Scene 4: Exterior Night

Points:7 (7.00%)

Points Range:7 (7.00%) - 7 (7.00%)

action, not dialogue Scene describes where action takes place with “Goldilocks rule” Scene describes characters who appear for first time with “Goldilocks rule” 1 character performs 1 action in scene that reveals something about the character 1 character speaks 1 line of dialogue that reveals something about the character Scene ends with action, not dialogue

Points Range:6 (6.00%) - 6 (6.00%)

5 of 6 elements present

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 5 (5.00%)

1-4 elements present

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

The requirements are missing.

Split Column Story in Script

Points Range:7 (7.00%) - 7 (7.00%)

SCRIPT IS PROPERLY FORMATTED Script uses 1 character from column A Script uses 1 character from column B Script tells story with beginning, middle, and end Story presents product positively

Points Range:6 (6.00%) - 6 (6.00%)

SCRIPT IS PROPERLY FORMATTED and 3 of 4 OTHER elements present

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 5 (5.00%)

SCRIPT IS PROPERLY FORMATTED and 1-2 of 4 OTHER elements present

Points:0 (0.00%)

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

The requirements are missing OR THE SCRIPT IS NOT PROPERLY FORMATTED.

Grammar and Spelling

Points Range:14 (14.00%) - 15 (15.00%)

Correct spelling and grammar are used throughout the script. There are 0–2 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.

Points:13 (13.00%)

Points Range:13 (13.00%) - 13 (13.00%)

There are 3–5 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.

Feedback:

Page numbers

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 12 (12.00%)

There are 6–10 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

There are more than 10 errors in the grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.

Page Count

Points Range:14 (14.00%) - 15 (15.00%)

The required window of 2 pages per script is met, +/-1 % per script.

Points Range:13 (13.00%) - 13 (13.00%)

The length is +/- 2-- 9%

Points:12 (12.00%)

Points Range:1 (1.00%) - 12 (12.00%)

The length is +/- 10-- 90%

Points Range:0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)

The length is +/- more than 90%.

Raw Total: 81.00 (of 100)

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Had to many pages try to stick to 2-3 pages and include story about the product or a similar product that was pictured

Narrative Script Story 0 points out of 7

Split Column Script Story 0 points out of 7 again the product was not included in the context of the script.

You can’t do a commercial about Dove soap and never mention the product.

Hope this helps. Overall good job, but you have to include every aspect in the script. You do that and you will easily get those other points.

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