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The Ackerman Scenogram (Adapted from Hal Ackerman, UCLA)

Author and Title

xxx, Intruders

Exposition

Unifying Devices

Intruders. Not sane in the respect for one’s privacy. Only that this one here has a particular agenda that is disturbingly acute to even look at. I am writing this in on my bed with only my bedside lamps on. The other half of the room is dark. This picture gives me the creeps on what could be lying under the bed. If not my bed then my brother’s bed and if not his, which poor soul on this God’s earth will fall victim of the intruder under the bed. The person in this picture is it a homeless man, a lost emaciated man, or a battered wife. The eyes tell me that this is a being with a sinister motive. To choke me in my sleep, suck my blood or steal my cat, or steal our food and the hands clearly tell she has been busy with dirty works.

Bedroom, pictures, food, and neighbors.

Who hurts the man?

ACT I

Who investigates screams, who is hiding?

ACT II

Why vanish from neighbors?

ACT III

Act I Title

Act II Title

Act III Title

A lady finds her way to the ex-husband’s garage and follows him upstairs to his bed! She has bad intention about the man. She arms herself with wooden stake.

She drives a wooden stake through his heart when he has just he gotten ready to sleep. The man starts screaming as a result of the pain he is feeling.

His screams leads the neighbors to come charging to the house to investigate. In fact, neighbors are curious to know what has happened to one of them.

As neighbors make up to the bedroom they hear dog like noises coming from the bed room and they became worried. Some people thinking is a dog, which might have caused the injury to the man.

It is established that the screams are coming from the bed room. Thereafter, neighbors decided to go near to the bedroom door to have clear information of what is happening.

As neighbors run towards it, breaking down the bedroom door, and finding the woman, who swiftly hides under the bed while growing like a wild boar.

The lady becomes fearful because of the neighbors miling to know what has occurred to the man. Thereafter the lady crawls up again and jumps off the window, making a perfect landing on the concrete floor on the front porch of the garage.

The vanishes into the darkness while letting out a haunting shriek...while one of the neighbor who has been spooked to death gives out the spooky one liners like “Oh dear God, what…what…was that…thing” to send a chill down the spine.

ACT I

The lady is driving a wooden stake through the heart of her ex-husband. Source of dispute is unknown

ACT II

Neighbors are investigating about the screams as well as looking for the people involved in the act. They are seen breaking the bed room door to find the victim and the culprit.

ACT III

The lady harming her ex-husband is escaping from neighbors. She jumps through the window and disappears from the neighbors

Inciting Incident

A lady follows her ex-husband from the garage to upstairs and drives a wooden stake through his heart thus causing injury to the man.