Analysis

Ethics group coursework- MGT3146 by Alia Karbani

Submission date: 22-Mar-2020 07:32PM (UTC+0000) Submission ID: 122522660 File name: 77216_Alia_Karbani_Ethics_group_coursework-_MGT3146_1046802_1093516723.docx (92.15K) Word count: 3256 Character count: 20143

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Interesting point

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Excellent recommendation

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FINAL GRADE

71/100 Ethics group coursework- MGT3146 GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

This is a very thoughtful analysis, with a particularly strong recommendations section. There was some room for improvement, in particular in relation to the application of the ethics of duty and the consideration of the government in the Kline section.

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Moderated: Some good points and recommendations. What can consumers do? Make sure facts are referenced (eg point about labour laws/heat stroke). Minor writing and grammar issues.

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Introduction

Introduction

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health insurance is only an issue in the US

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How does this relate to health plans?

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This needs better explanation

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Interesting point

Interesting point

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OK, but the current business model is currently also profitable.

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Yes, if the customers care enough.

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Do not bring in virtue ethics in. Better to say: the company does not respect the workers' rights.

Comment 8

You chose relevant rights here but you could have also reflected on the rights of other stakeholders eg the rights of the company (related to Article 17) and the rights of the customer to a value-for- money service.

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Comment 10

You should also apply the universality principle here.

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provide page numbers when citing from textbooks

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Also commission as company apparently puts pressure on the workers.

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Hold off with recommendations

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Good application of Kline to the responsibilities of Amazon, and acknowledgement of role of other stakeholders. The responsibility of the government should have been considered here, too.

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Excellent recommendation

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Excellent recommendation

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also time, which employees might not have.

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Comment 16

Fair point but company could see it as an investment.

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Comment 17

You could have put the date for each meeting and stated how many group members attended.