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MGT3146 Individual Coursework

Submission date: 11-Dec-2019 12:23PM (UTC+0000) Submission ID: 115887921 File name: Word count: 3399 Character count: 20995

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Introduction well written

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Hofstede well written

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Less comparison, more culturally intelligent advice

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Cultural analysis well written

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8% STUDENT PAPERS

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MGT3146 Individual Coursework ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

Submitted to Middlesex University Student Paper

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于 2013-04-22 提交至 University of Leeds Student Paper

Submitted to Oxford Brookes University Student Paper

Submitted to University of Pretoria Student Paper

Submitted to Aston University Student Paper

Submitted to Otago Polytechnic Student Paper

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Submitted to University of East London Student Paper

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Submitted to Intercollege Student Paper

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Submitted to University of South Australia Student Paper

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FINAL GRADE

74/100 MGT3146 Individual Coursework GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

A good piece of work covers the key function of an assignment: it is proof that you’ve done the reading, that you can apply this reading to a practical situation and that you can think critically and provide solutions. Like a book, a report has a plot. This means that you’ve written a clear introduction of the purpose of the report, presented as a professional consultant and it includes a contextual description of the globalised world as it stands to give the reader a context.

You were also able to include relevant macro-level information that facilitates a basic understanding for the conference participants, using practical examples including own experience are not written up as a diary but are formatted as examples that can be found in current affairs outlets. But macro-level analyses only give us socio-economic information and we want to know more about culture.

Since this report is for a practical audience with various backgrounds, the Hofstede analysis is to the point, focusing on the main differences and not just a description of the dimensions. Any evidence found of cultural difference is relevant to the brief and is balanced.

But Hofstede is only useful up to a point. A good report then includes a clear analysis of the articles addressing the following topics (sub headed): Decision Making, Negotiation & Communication, Leadership & Cultural Intelligence. A good report includes the practical implications for managers for each of the articles and found examples to illustrate the key message with a culturally intelligent analysis that is useful for any conference participant, who may be bi-cultural/mixed or operates in a cross cultural situation.

A good report has a brief conclusion that reflects good business sense that is useful for a manager and reflects cultural intelligence and sensitivity to the complex, globalised environment and included key recommendations that are presented using bullet points. References at the end of the report are reliable, more than 6 sources. Grammar and Spelling is correct

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and a good report guides the reader by making one point per paragraph, linking sections and explaining how to interpret the information.

In general, good practical advice on each of the sections and there is strong evidence of engaging theory covered in the lecture.

use of core and essential texts and of assigned reading articles evident.

Congratulations!

NvM: moderated. A good report, well written, structured and resourced. Ensure you explain how to achieve recommendations.

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Not needed - table of contents It wasn't necessary to include a table of contents. If you do, always make sure it is useful and include page numbers. Table of contents is useful for larger documents, with many subheadings.

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Introduction well written This is a clear introduction of the purpose of the report, written up as a professional consultant, not as a student (i.e., avoided ‘for my course work I had to… ‘) and includes a contextual description of the globalised world as it stands. Additional Comment

use of articles to add depth and reflects challenge of globalization for audience effectively.

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Reference issue Learn how to reference properly - check the resources via the library or LET. Middlesex University uses Harvard APA. https://unihub.mdx.ac.uk/your-study/learning-enhancement-team/online- resources/referencing-and-avoiding-plagiarism

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Additional Comment

not just relying on the no score. good effort!

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Hofstede well written Evidence that you have understood key issues and been able to effectively integrate theory and practice, using Hofstede’s dimensions as a starting point and comparing country or origin with the executive's destination. Student included a graph as shown in class. Additional Comment

to the point and relevant interpretations for the audience. use of additional sources for depth of discussion is appreciated. reflects limitations of the model and suggests way forward.

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Comment 1

excellent use of the article

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a bit vague on the last sentence here.

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Less comparison, more culturally intelligent advice You continue to comparison here but it's key to move on from country A vs country B and think about management behaviour in a truly international environment where A vs B isn't applicable because there are many mixed backgrounds etc. What is the culturally intelligent thing to do here? Decision making, negotiating etc have distinct theories and the role of culture should be considered, using practical examples to make the point.

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Cultural analysis well written Clear analysis of selected country x Netherlands on the following topics (sub headed, using creative and innovative titles): Values & globalization, Decision Making, Negotiation & Communication, Leadership & Cultural Intelligence. You included practical examples from the Financial Times etc. You're advising an executive who works in the a specific sector, so there's lots going on! Additional Comment

discussion points clearly show evidence of engaging theory and use of other sources appropriately applied for the audience. this is excellent work.

Conclusion

A conclusion is a summary that makes good business sense that is useful for a manager and reflects cultural intelligence and sensitivity to the complex, globalised environment. New information needs to be discussed beforehand because a conclusion is wrapping up the entire report.

Conclusion - well written Coherence, synthesis and integration of contents: The summary reflects good business sense that is useful for a manager and reflects cultural intelligence and sensitivity to the complex, globalised

environment. <br /><br />Personal experience/anecdotes are not written up as a diary but are formatted as examples that can be found in current affairs outlets. Facts are referenced.<br /><br /> <br />

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