Capstone Paper - Academic Paper - Not an Essay - Very Careful with References. 0 Plagiarism. 36 HOURS. A+ WORK
Rubric Detail A rubric lists grading criteria that instructors use to evaluate student work. Your instructor linked a rubric to this item and made it available to you. Select Grid View or List View to change the rubric's layout.
Advanced Pro�cient Developing Not Present
Statement of Topic
46 (15.33333%) - 50 (16.66666%)
Clear statement of topic . The writer discusses either the unique aspect of the topic or the challenges presented by the topic
42 (14.00%) - 45 (15.00%)
General statement of topic . The writer discusses either the unique aspect of the topic or the challenges presented by the topic
38 (12.66666%)
1 (0.33333%) - 41 (13.66666%)
Incomplete or vague statement of topic . The writer fails to discuss either the unique aspect of the topic or the challenges presented by the topic
0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)
Not present.
Analysis and Support
46 (15.33333%) - 50 (16.66666%)
Paper's analysis of problems/solutions/challenges is convincing and well
42 (14.00%) - 45 (15.00%)
Paper's analysis of problems/solutions/challenges is somewhat convincing and
30 (10.00%)
1 (0.33333%) - 41 (13.66666%)
0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)
Not present.
Name: Capstone Paper Grading RubricREV2018 Exit
Grid View List View
Advanced Pro�cient Developing Not Present
is convincing and well supported
is somewhat convincing and well supported Paper presents
problems/solutions/challenges but does not provide analysis
Organization 46 (15.33333%) - 50 (16.66666%)
Paper's organization is e�ective in terms of the writer's purpose
43 (14.33333%)
42 (14.00%) - 45 (15.00%)
Paper's organization is appropriate in terms of the writer's purpose
1 (0.33333%) - 41 (13.66666%)
Paper's organization does not seem to serve the writer's purpose
0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)
Not present.
Research/ Sources
46 (15.33333%) - 50 (16.66666%)
Paper gathers information from a variety of relevant, recent scholarly sources
42 (14.00%) - 45 (15.00%)
Paper gathers information from a variety of relevant, scholarly sources
35 (11.66666%)
1 (0.33333%) - 41 (13.66666%)
Paper needs more information from a variety of relevant, scholarly sources
0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)
Not present.
Awareness of best practice
46 (15.33333%) - 50 (16.66666%)
Paper's description of problems/challenges and solutions/next steps re�ects a convincing awareness of scholarly best practice.
42 (14.00%) - 45 (15.00%)
Paper's description of problems/challenges and solutions/next steps re�ects a growing awareness of scholarly best practice.
35 (11.66666%)
1 (0.33333%) - 41 (13.66666%)
Paper's description of problems/challenges and solutions/next steps re�ects little awareness of scholarly best practice.
0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)
Not present.
Written expression
23 (7.66666%) - 25 (8.33333%)
Writing is characterized by forcefulness, clarity and grace
21 (7.00%) - 22 (7.33333%)
Writing is clear but not forceful
18 (6.00%)
1 (0.33333%) - 20 (6.66666%)
0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)
Not present.
Advanced Pro�cient Developing Not PresentWriting contains distracting lapses in style or mechanics
Format 23 (7.66666%) - 25 (8.33333%)
Paper fully meets APA or MLA guidelines.
21 (7.00%)
21 (7.00%) - 22 (7.33333%)
Paper meets APA or MLA guidelines with minor distractions.
1 (0.33333%) - 20 (6.66666%)
Paper either combines both formats or fails to follow APA or MLA guidelines.
0 (0.00%) - 0 (0.00%)
Not present.
Raw Total: 220.00 (of 300)
Feedback to Learner
Yolanda, Thank you for all your hard work on this essay. It very much �ts as a capstone, and I hope the process has been helpful in developing your thinking. You take up an important part of the writing process here (generating a �rst draft), and it's a thorny issue from a pedagogical perspective, as idea generation is something that is di�cult to guide a student through. Overall, you touch on some of the issues that surround �rst drafts here, but I'm somewhat surprised by some of the broad comments about education/students/teaching in general. Put brie�y, the essay could be strengthened by a greater focus on drafting/composition in particular. Additionally, the sources could be better used, as in many cases, I'm not even sure what it is that you're citing (your usage is also uncommon in MLA, which generally features much more speci�c citations). Were you to take up the issue again, I'd encourage a deeper dive into the secondary literature speci�cally. Especially in a course like this, I would much prefer getting to comment more fully on your work, but we have a very short turn-around on a number of projects in these �nal weeks. Please do reach out to me if you'd like to discuss your work more fully. I'm always happy to do so, despite the o�cial end of our course. I hope you're well, and let me know if I can be of help with anything. All Best, AW
Name:Capstone Paper Grading RubricREV2018
Exit