need to revised the paper. (in three hours)

General (15pts)

Criteria

Ratings

Pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeWell-developed argument and/or concrete analysis and/or coherent opinion: Reflective essay responses with details that demonstrate student has read (or watched) and understood materials. References to the material (quotes, etc.) are included in response.

I don't know if you were translating parts of this, Ali, because the ideas were a bit all over the place! Nevertheless, I did grasp the main idea in each response. The fourth question needed a more solid answer though. Also, there were no direct references to the text (footnotes).

1 / 3.0 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeFormatting: Calibri 11 pt font, double-spacing. Answer sheet utilized. Expected length is 2 ENTIRE pages, maximum and minimum. Use universal language (e.g. “humankind” not “mankind”).

Well done.

3 / 3.0 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeCritical apparatus: In-text citations for sacred texts. Chicago Manual of Style footnotes and bibliography for all other types of text if specified in Assignment Sheet.

In-text citations were correctly constructed. CMS required throughout.

1 / 3.0 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeSpelling, grammar, punctuation: Corrections will be made in Canvas. If you cannot see either these corrections, or any of my comments, contact IT for help.

Negligible error.

3 / 3.0 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeAesthetic of language, presentation and ideas: If you wish to include any image, cut and paste the url of the website where you found it, and paste this into your footnotes.

More or less, Ali! More or less LOL

3 / 3.0 pts

Total Points: 11