1500 words essay ---lzy

Please view the rubric, but also click on "view feedback" to see my additional comments. Here are my three goals for you for your final essay, which you will need to copy and paste into the "Addressing Goals" assignment that will become available later, along with a short paragraph for each explaining what you have done to review the things you need to work on before (or while) writing your final essay. 1. You need more information and more examples to back up your general statements. 2. Correct citations for articles with more than one author. 3. Do not continue to repeat the same point Let me know if you have any questions about these goals, or need some help in figuring out how to address them.

MLA format is followed, including proper page numbering, heading, spacing, and margins.

Essay has a clear thesis statement, and each paragraph contains a topic sentence related to the thesis. The topics follow the order of the thesis statement, and are arranged logically. Transitions between paragraphs are present and smooth. There is a clear conclusion that draws together the points of the essaying a way that reflects but does not repeat the thesis.

The topic is thoroughly explained (within the parameters of the thesis), and the reader is not left with unanswered questions or an incomplete understanding. Concrete, specific details are included to support the thesis and to enhance the reader's understanding of the topic. Vague generalizations are avoided.

Parenthetical citations are in the proper format, are punctuated properly, and are used at appropriate points to document source material.

The works cited page is in proper format, all entries are cited in parenthetical citations at least once, and the minimum of six separate sources cited has been met or exceeded.

Sentences are complete and grammatically correct. Spelling and punctuation are correct. Ten or more grammatical errors will result in a zero on this section.