Writing Assistance

profileLaw101
roughdrafthse300.pdf

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15% SIMILARITY INDEX

11% INTERNET SOURCES

8% PUBLICATIONS

8% STUDENT PAPERS

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rough draft ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

ebin.pub Internet Source

"Handbook of Disaster Research", Springer Science and Business Media LLC, 2018 Publication

nordopen.nord.no Internet Source

store.samhsa.gov Internet Source

Submitted to Johnson and Wales University Student Paper

Submitted to Liberty University Student Paper

www.sweetstudy.com Internet Source

Submitted to Trident University International Student Paper

www.govinfo.gov Internet Source

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Submitted to Georgia Military College Student Paper

Submitted to American Public University System Student Paper

Submitted to Grand Canyon University Student Paper

"Urban Disaster Resilience and Security", Springer Science and Business Media LLC, 2018 Publication

Submitted to University of West London Student Paper

iosrjournals.org Internet Source

www.researchgate.net Internet Source

Submitted to Kennedy-Western University Student Paper

s3.amazonaws.com Internet Source

www.americancityandcounty.com Internet Source

www.nallaseth.com Internet Source

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integratedwealthllc.advisorproducts.com Internet Source

www.coursehero.com Internet Source

Submitted to Australian National University Student Paper

www.rivistaitalianadipublicmanagement.it Internet Source

Submitted to Friendswood High School Student Paper

www.bartleby.com Internet Source

www.routledge.com Internet Source

"Global Health Security", Springer Science and Business Media LLC, 2020 Publication

Bea, Keith. "The Formative Years : 1950– 1978", Emergency Management The American Experience 1900-2010 Second Edition, 2012. Publication

FINAL GRADE

90/100

rough draft GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

Hello Kimberley,

Good work on your rough draft. Please see your feedback comments.

Large sections should be separated into smaller paragraphs. 

Additional in-text references and research to support your main points are needed. Ten points were deducted.

Good work addressing FEMA. 

Additional section headings are needed. 

Please note that only the first word and any pronouns should be capitalized in our reference titles. For more information on APA formatting, please feel free to review: http://www.apastyle.org/apa-style-help.aspx

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Comment 1

Large sections should be separated into smaller paragraphs. 

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Comment 2

Hello Kimberley,

Good work on your rough draft. Please see your feedback comments.

Large sections should be separated into smaller paragraphs. 

Additional in-text references and research to support your main points are needed. Ten points were deducted.

Good work addressing FEMA. 

Additional section headings are needed. 

Please note that only the first word and any pronouns should be capitalized in our reference titles. For more information on APA formatting, please feel free to review: http://www.apastyle.org/apa- style-help.aspx

Comment 3

Good work on your introduction. 

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Comment 4

Additional in-text references and research to support your main points are needed. 

Comment 5

Additional in-text references and research to support your main points are needed throughout your paper.

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Comment 6

Good work addressing these concerns.

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Comment 7

Good work addressing FEMA. 

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Comment 8

Additional section headings are needed. 

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Comment 9

References needed.

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Comment 10

Overall, good work!

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Comment 11

Please note that only the first word and any pronouns should be capitalized in our reference titles. For more information on APA formatting, please feel free to review: http://www.apastyle.org/apa-style-help.aspx

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