Writing Assistance
Law101
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11% INTERNET SOURCES
8% PUBLICATIONS
8% STUDENT PAPERS
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rough draft ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
ebin.pub Internet Source
"Handbook of Disaster Research", Springer Science and Business Media LLC, 2018 Publication
nordopen.nord.no Internet Source
store.samhsa.gov Internet Source
Submitted to Johnson and Wales University Student Paper
Submitted to Liberty University Student Paper
www.sweetstudy.com Internet Source
Submitted to Trident University International Student Paper
www.govinfo.gov Internet Source
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Submitted to Georgia Military College Student Paper
Submitted to American Public University System Student Paper
Submitted to Grand Canyon University Student Paper
"Urban Disaster Resilience and Security", Springer Science and Business Media LLC, 2018 Publication
Submitted to University of West London Student Paper
iosrjournals.org Internet Source
www.researchgate.net Internet Source
Submitted to Kennedy-Western University Student Paper
s3.amazonaws.com Internet Source
www.americancityandcounty.com Internet Source
www.nallaseth.com Internet Source
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integratedwealthllc.advisorproducts.com Internet Source
www.coursehero.com Internet Source
Submitted to Australian National University Student Paper
www.rivistaitalianadipublicmanagement.it Internet Source
Submitted to Friendswood High School Student Paper
www.bartleby.com Internet Source
www.routledge.com Internet Source
"Global Health Security", Springer Science and Business Media LLC, 2020 Publication
Bea, Keith. "The Formative Years : 1950– 1978", Emergency Management The American Experience 1900-2010 Second Edition, 2012. Publication
FINAL GRADE
90/100
rough draft GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
Hello Kimberley,
Good work on your rough draft. Please see your feedback comments.
Large sections should be separated into smaller paragraphs.
Additional in-text references and research to support your main points are needed. Ten points were deducted.
Good work addressing FEMA.
Additional section headings are needed.
Please note that only the first word and any pronouns should be capitalized in our reference titles. For more information on APA formatting, please feel free to review: http://www.apastyle.org/apa-style-help.aspx
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Comment 1
Large sections should be separated into smaller paragraphs.
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Comment 2
Hello Kimberley,
Good work on your rough draft. Please see your feedback comments.
Large sections should be separated into smaller paragraphs.
Additional in-text references and research to support your main points are needed. Ten points were deducted.
Good work addressing FEMA.
Additional section headings are needed.
Please note that only the first word and any pronouns should be capitalized in our reference titles. For more information on APA formatting, please feel free to review: http://www.apastyle.org/apa- style-help.aspx
Comment 3
Good work on your introduction.
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Comment 4
Additional in-text references and research to support your main points are needed.
Comment 5
Additional in-text references and research to support your main points are needed throughout your paper.
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Comment 6
Good work addressing these concerns.
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Comment 7
Good work addressing FEMA.
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Comment 8
Additional section headings are needed.
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Comment 9
References needed.
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Comment 10
Overall, good work!
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Comment 11
Please note that only the first word and any pronouns should be capitalized in our reference titles. For more information on APA formatting, please feel free to review: http://www.apastyle.org/apa-style-help.aspx
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