Risk management 2

risk management by Dunya Al-brieki

Submission date: 24-Nov-2020 10:52PM (UTC+0400) Submission ID: 1456290819 File name: RM_individual.docx (71.46K) Word count: 2583 Character count: 14115

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whose proposal

Samiha and her Bakery is in Oman why are calculating the loan amount in Dollars

Listening to instruction helps. The assignment is contextualised to Oman.

Why is the working capital in USD

Borrowing material from internet sources does not always help. The material should be fit for purpose.

You have claimed that this is a SME . Upto 2018 SMES were not under the tax bracket. From where will samiha produce tax returns

or should it be her bakery????

OK but the similarity is high here

whose work is this ????

all this relates to why do we need to manage credit risk

This is a Oman specific assignmnet. You have been provided with some sources of information.

In this entire paragraph there is only the last three sentences which tells me what a credit risk management framework is about.

there is nothing of Oman here

All that is needed here is the meaning of credit risk culture . Why are you writing all this

wonderful list of references, Could you read all this within the tree weeks available for you to write this assignment.

You have mentioned Oman Arab Bank. Strangely the source is not referenced.

No reference to the local regulator and supervisor CBO.

The sources cited by have have been used in other student papers. They are not appearing under your name,

21% SIMILARITY INDEX

8% INTERNET SOURCES

2% PUBLICATIONS

19% STUDENT PAPERS

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risk management ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

Submitted to College of Banking and Financial Studies Student Paper

iriaf.univ-poitiers.fr Internet Source

Submitted to Monash University Student Paper

Submitted to University of Sydney Student Paper

Submitted to Coventry University Student Paper

Submitted to Gulf College Oman Student Paper

Michael Voskoglou. "chapter 16 Use of Finite Markov Chains in Business Problems Involving Decision Making and Case-Based Reasoning", IGI Global, 2021 Publication

mpra.ub.uni-muenchen.de

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Submitted to University of Southampton Student Paper

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Submitted to Northcentral Student Paper

www.journal.uinjkt.ac.id Internet Source

Submitted to University of Bristol Student Paper

insis.vse.cz Internet Source

www.ukessays.com Internet Source

Submitted to University of Northumbria at Newcastle Student Paper

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FINAL GRADE

1/20 risk management GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

This assignment is based on

Learning Outcome 2: demonstrate knowledge and understanding of how financial institutions manage credit risk and liquidity risk

Task/

Question

Marks available

Marks awarded

Task 1 5 4

Task 2 10 8

Task 3 5 4

Total

Who is Amina and why are using a file created by her?

Marks will be uploaded only when I am able to ascertain the authenticity of this work. There can be severe consequences if the work cannot be proved as your effort. The work is generic. there is nothing specific about Oman and it seems like it is prepared by an expert and not a S3 student learning risk management for the first time.

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what is XXX?

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Text Comment. Samiha and her Bakery is in Oman why are calculating the loan amount in Dollars

Text Comment. Listening to instruction helps. The assignment is contextualised to Oman.

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Possessive You may need to use an apostrophe to show possession.

Text Comment. Why is the working capital in USD

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Text Comment. Borrowing material from internet sources does not always help. The material should be fit for purpose.

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Text Comment. You have claimed that this is a SME . Upto 2018 SMES were not under the tax bracket. From where will samiha produce tax returns

Text Comment. or should it be her bakery????

Frag. This sentence may be a fragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proofread the sentence to be sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clause with a complete subject and predicate.

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Possessive You may need to use an apostrophe to show possession.

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Text Comment. OK but the similarity is high here

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Text Comment. whose work is this ????

all this relates to why do we need to manage credit risk

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Text Comment. This is a Oman specific assignmnet. You have been provided with some sources of information.

Text Comment. In this entire paragraph there is only the last three sentences which tells me what a credit risk management framework is about.

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Text Comment. there is nothing of Oman here

Missing "," You may need to place a comma after this word.

Text Comment. All that is needed here is the meaning of credit risk culture . Why are you writing all this

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Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize in the sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.

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Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.

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Text Comment. wonderful list of references, Could you read all this within the tree weeks available for you to write this assignment.

Text Comment. You have mentioned Oman Arab Bank. Strangely the source is not referenced.

Text Comment. No reference to the local regulator and supervisor CBO.

Text Comment. The sources cited by have have been used in other student papers. They are not appearing under your name,

RUBRIC: UG ASSIGNMENT RUBRIC

CRITERION 1

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CRITERION 2

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CRITERION 3

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Knowledge

Shows well-coordinated understanding of subject

Sound understanding of subject matter

Major facts are understood

Shows understanding of basic issues/theory

Minimal understanding of basic issues/topic

No understanding of the topic/subject area

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Analysis

Touches upon all relevant issues/theory. Concise analysis

Detailed coverage of basic concepts/theory. Reasonable coverage of subtle issues/theory

Reasoned argument and sequencing

Shows evidence of understanding of concepts. Coverage of obvious ideas.

Fails to identify subtle issues/theory. Captures obvious ideas.

No or minimal understanding of the key theories/topic

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Research

Excellent referencing and reading in all areas

Use of up to date resources. Well informed and generally accurate information provided. Clear referencing

74-84 B (0)

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CRITERION 4

90-100 A (0)

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CRITERION 5

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Appropriate referencing

Adequate referencing and reading.

Weak reading and referencing

Poor referencing. Shows lack of reading/references out of date

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Relevance

All material used is of relevance

Material used is relevant

Discussion shows relationship to theory

Some material repetitive

Some repetitive matter. Irrelevant

Poor conclusion. Poor knowledge application.

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Conclusion

Excellent conclusion. Brings together all concepts and adds an original perspective

Intelligent conclusion. Good application of knowledge

Methods incorporate modifications used

Conclusion in place but key points missing. Reasonable application of knowledge

Weak conclusion and content. Satisfactory application of ideas/theory

Poor conclusion. Poor knowledge application.

CRITERION 6

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CRITERION 7

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Writing

Excellent articulation. Accurate grammar/spelling

Ideas expressed in a clear and coherent manner. Language fluent and grammar/spelling accurate

Clarity in writing is evidenced

Language fluent. No major grammatical/spelling errors

Frequent errors in writing

Poor written skills-spelling, grammar construction of sentences

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Structure

Clear and coherent Structure with excellent presentation

Structure is clear and supports argument. Presentation appropriate

Appropriate structure

Coherent structure. Satisfactory presentation of matter

Weak structure/presentation

Poor structure/presentation