music and labor 0ct 6 2024

1.      Read your peer’s essay.

2.      Annotate the essay, make comments, etc.

3.      Discuss your thoughts with your peers.

4.      Fill out the below form and give a copy to your peer.

5.      Upload a copy of the filled-out document to canvas.

Whose essay are you reviewing?

What is this essay’s thesis statement? Does it make sense? Is it specific? Interesting?

Does their introduction follow the 3 introductory moves?

Do the body paragraphs contain a mix of TEAL? ( Topic,  Evidence,  Analysis,  Link) Though not every paragraph needs all 4 elements, are there any paragraphs that feel overstuffed or undercooked?

Which parts of the essay stand out to you? What’s working well? Are there any elements you would consider incorporating into your own writing?

Where do you see the rhetorical strategies we’ve discussed? Does the author hedge? Boost? Do they ask rhetorical questions or provide directives? Where might they consider adding these in?

What suggestions do you have for ways your peer could improve their essay? Where are you confused? Where is your attention drifting?

I HAVE ATTACHED MY FRIEND DRAFT BELOW, YOU HAVE TO DO A PEER REVIEW ACCORDING TO THE INSTRUCTIONS GIVEN ABOVE.