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I. Introduction

A. Background Information: Obesity has increasingly become a significant concern in our society. It is a complicated health problem resulting from various factors such as food addiction, lack of physical activity, medication. The number of obese people has augmented since 1975, with over 1.9 billion adults suffering from obesity. In America, over 78.6 million adults are obese, with most of them between ages 40-59 years. These statistics display obesity as an escalating concern Thesis Statement: causes of Obesity in adults are high salty food intake levels, low levels of physical activity and junk meals.

II. Body (CAUSE)

The leading cause of obesity in adults is consuming high amounts of processed foods; these types of food usually have high fat and sugar levels, hard to burn. You will find most obese adults had been consuming much fast food while not engaging in any physical exercise to burn them off. For example, with all the existing fast foods (e.g., McDonald), it has become a habit for people to eat out regularly, consuming many unhealthy foods. B. Cause or Effect: Explanation: Moreover, Environmental factors also play a role in influencing behavior. For example, food commercials encourage adults to buy unprocessed foods that are unhealthy and high in sugar and fats, resulting in food addiction, thus leading to obesity. Consuming high amounts of unhealthy foods and not burning them off is that the fat and sugar consumed stored in the body. Since they are hard to burn off, they affect the body by increasing blood sugar and leptin resistance associated with weight gain.

Conclusion In summary, the primary cause of obesity is high food intake levels, coupled with low levels of physical activity and unhealthy meals. Environmental factors causing more people to buy unhealthy foods and their unwillingness to exercise and burn off the excess fast makes obesity possible. Obesity is a serious issue that leads to other more severe diseases.

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Topic: Adult Obesity

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Cause Effect consuming a lot of food and not burning off the necessary energy

The body will store surplus energy as fats

Hyperthyroidism Not enough hormones are produced Cushing’s syndrome Steroid hormones are being overproduced Environment Influences our activity and eating habits

Title: Obesity in Adults

Introduction

Obesity has increasingly become a great concern in our society; it is defined as a co health

problem that is a result of various factors. The number of obese people has augmented since 1975

with over 1.9 billion adults suffering from obesity. In America over 78.6 million adults are obese

with the majority of them between ages 40-59 years. These statistics clearly display obesity as an

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escalating concern. According to Meldrum. Thesis Statement: Obesity in adults is predominantly

caused by high levels of food intake, coupled with low levels of physical activity.

One of the main causes of obesity in adults is consuming high amounts of processed foods;

these types of food usually have high levels of fat and sugar which are hard to burn. One will find

most obese adults had been consuming a lot of fast food whilst not engaging in any physical

exercise to burn them off. For example with all the existing fast foods (e.g. McDonald) it has

become a habit for people to eat out on a regular basis consuming a lot of unhealthy foods.

Moreover, environmental factors also play a role in obesity by influencing behavior. For

example, food commercials encourage adults to buy unprocessed foods that are unhealthy and high

in sugar and fats which for some may eventually result in a food addition thus leading to obesity.

The effect of consuming high amounts of unhealthy foods and not burning them off is that

the fat and sugar consumed is stored in the body, since they are hard to burn off they affect the

body by increasing the blood sugar and leptin resistance which are associated to weight gain.

Conclusion

In summary, the primary cause of obesity is due to high levels of food intake, coupled with

low levels of physical activity. With environmental factors causing more people to be tempted to

buy unhealthy foods and their unwillingness to exercise and burn of the excess fast makes obesity

possible. Obesity must be taken seriously as it may lead to other more serious diseases. According

to Meldrum.

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