essay about risk

· DON’T FOEGET THE MAIN QUESTION :Provide a critical overview of the approaches available to measure and manage a non-market risk which is the Operating Risk

· Where is the introduction of the essay ???

· What is an operational risk ?

· understanding of Operating Risk Operating Risk (explaining the source and why is significant)

· How operational risk is identified ?

· First 200 words has no in text citation you should add that

· How operating risk is managed ?

· the measurement of operating risk and the ways it can be managed make it clear in the essay :should both evolve from the early days and should be a focus on what is most recent implementations in this areas.

Demonstrate an understanding of recent developments in the area of risk analysis and risk management; (looking at the dynamic process how it emerge and what recently has been implemented )

evidence of a clear appreciation of the value and limitations of risk measurement and management tools

· You have to show me in the essay which approach are to measure and which ones are to manage operating Risk make the headline clear .

· Organize the report in a way that is readable and understandable.

· Recommendation is not clear you are explaining again the approaches you should make a recommendation

· More in text citations to support the argument

· More evidence to support the research

· The essay is not organized

· If some of my comments has been already explained so make it more clear and readable so reader understand what part is he reading

Marks will be awarded for the student's ability to:
· Demonstrate an understanding of the allocated non-market risk.
· Demonstrate an understanding of recent developments in the area of risk analysis and risk management;
· Present evidence of a clear appreciation of the value and limitations of risk measurement and management tools;
· Present in a clear and well-structured way
· Correctly referencing throughout;
· Marks are awarded for evidence of research, thinking and learning (not reading & copying).