Comparative Essay Revision

1) the introduction is solid. In the summaries, the third paragraph feels a off, I think you should probably present as an example in beginning of the paragraph rather than the end. The comparison was good, but the contrast needs a little more explanation to be clear. Thank you! 2) I really enjoyed reading your essay. I like that you clearly defined what you would be talking about such as the Introduction, summaries, commonalities, etc. I would suggest however that you use quotation marks when using and implementing quotes from the reading. I saw that you had some direct evidence/quotes from the reading so I would just suggest making those small changes so that you don't get marked down for plagiarism. Overall, it was really well put together.