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Submit your revised Turkle Summary paragraph from Module 1 to the Assignments section of the classroom.

The following should be submitted with your assignment:

· Your revised paragraph should have the original draft paragraph (the one you posted to the Discussion Board) at the top and the revised paragraph at the bottom. Both paragraphs should be labeled and fit on one page.

· Your justification in bullet points for your revision. The justification should provide the changes you made from the draft to the revised paragraph and can cover any the following:

· Topic Sentence

· Examples

· Coherence

· Order (which one)

· Transitions (which ones)

· Unity

· Closing Sentence (clincher)