Can someone answer 8 questions a nd a shrt paper?

This title makes it seem as though you are writing an informative, instead of an argumentative paper. You might consider a change in title.

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The organization of the paper is the following: 1. Introduction of the paper 2. Literature Review--preface, background, pro, con, and conclusion 3. Body Paragraphs--3 to 4 paragraphs

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One issue that I see here is that you refer to "researchers" and "scholars," but there is really no sense of two groups here--one for and one against the use of telemedicine. While there may be many who find themselves with view points in between these extremes, you still want to not the two sides of the debate. This way, when you assert your thesis statement, you will do so within the context of the debate.

The final sentence of the introduction should be your thesis statement. What you have here is more of a statement of fact. You use the introduction to lay out the two sides of the debate by explaining the rationale of each side. Then you assert your own position in the thesis--agree with the pro side, disagree, or both agree and disagree. Take another look at the example paper to help you better understand this concept.

The LR preface should be here. The LR should be one unit. The second-level heading should be moved to the left-hand side. See the example paper for guidance.

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You are a good writer, and you have a good sense of how to summarize the ideas of your sources. However, you need to organize your summaries within the structure of the LR as given in the unit. You need to have a paragraph about the background/history of the situation or problem; then you need to further establish the pro and con sides of the debate by explaining the position of each side. Finally, you will summarize the position and reassert your own thesis in the conclusion as a way to both wrap up the LR and to transition to the body section.

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he LR should not be simply a list of summaries of your sources. You must actually organize the material so that it explains the context of the debate through the prescribed structure given in the unit.

You have not included a body section for this paper. You must include 3-4 body paragraphs that follow the PIE model given in the unit materials for Unit VI. I will write to you and offer you an additional attempt for this assignment.