economy

Mohammad,

Your paper is very well written and the topic of free speech on college campuses is intriguing and quite interesting. I only noticed a few places in your paper that could be worded differently or that are possible errors. In the first sentence I believe that there should be the word “the” between the words “that” and “policies” since you are referring to a particular set of policies. However I am not an expert in grammar so it could be fine the way that it is. The comma at the end of “students’ ” in the last paragraph under summary should be removed to where it is just “students”. In the first sentence under Literary Review the word “association” appears twice in a row which would appear to be a typo. Other than that I do not see anything else that could be an error or worded differently. The topic you picked is one that many people do not think about and it is good that you are writing about it. I enjoyed reading your paper and agree with your policy proposal. Good luck.

Sincerely,

Jordan Womack