Essay (Kim Woods)
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Resultsfromassignment3.docxBrittany - well done! You covered all parts of the assignment well! Good examples to support your statements. Good analysis of the video.
Your only area for focus is APA -- 1. to ensure you have a cite and ref for the video and 2. to have complete refs for the texts. The writing tutors can help with this.
Please see the additional feedback below and let me know if you have any questions. Dr. Gill
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Choose one of the research study videos. |
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Describe what this study demonstrated about human behavior and mental processes using the results of the study along with information learned in Units 1-3. good job choosing and defining terms and linking to the video with examples |
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Explain what is meant by nature versus nurture influences and which ones were demonstrated in the study. Good definitions and links to the video. I did not see a video or text cite in this area |
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Describe social observational learning and whether or not it was demonstrated in the study. Explain reasoning using reference to the study. Good job defining the term and providing examples from the video. Need to cite and ref the video |
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Explain whether or not this research was ethical or unethical? Explain reasoning using APA ethical guidelines described in Chapter 1. good discussions and examples |
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Structure: Good job! Please include full refs... you were missing the publication location. Please make sure you are citing and referencing the video too. --Paper includes a title page, introduction with thesis statement, conclusion, and in-text citations and reference page using APA style. --Paper is appropriate in length (body of the paper should be 2-4 pages, not including the title page or reference page). --Paper includes references to the textbook. |
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Mechanics: Good job with your writing mechanics! Your paper was well-written and well presented! --Paper uses Standard American English including correct grammar, spelling, and punctuation, and complete sentences and paragraphs. --Paper is free of typographical errors. --Paper includes a highly developed viewpoint and purpose. --Paper demonstrates superior organization; communication is highly ordered, logical and unified. |
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