I have a research plan and 5 references, and you can add one or two references. Academic writing is general.

Introduction

· a definition of 'kidney disease' (with a source). What kinds of healthcare providers are involved? Is it only hospitals?

· to explain why this question is important these days. 

Thesis statement

We will go through the effect of health care providers and a good family relationship on the psychological state of the kidney patient and coexistence with the disease naturally.

Main Body

1. Paragraph 1 impact does kidney disease have on the patient.

1.1- The psychological impact on the kidney patient.

1.2- Discovering kidney disease and entering the stage of depression.

1.3- The effect of kidney disease on the patient's general life.

1.4- Provide emotional support from the family and health care providers to help the patient accept the disease.

1.5- The positive effect of the psychological on acceptance of dialysis and coexistence with kidney disease.

2. Paragraph 2 impact does kidney disease have on his / her family.

2.1- The psychological impact of a kidney patient on the family.

2.2- The social and financial impact of a kidney patient on the family.

2.3- The positive impact when providing emotional support to the family of a kidney patient.

3. Paragraph 3 impact does kidney disease have on the healthcare providers.

3.1- Provide psychological and emotional support to the patient and his family.

3.2-

3.3-

Conclusion

In kidney disease, a person may develop a state of panic when learning of his injury. The family's intervention and their emotional influence greatly helps in accepting treatment and coping with the disease