English walnut
Content Meets expectations Adequate Minimal effort Format elements
Title page
The title page should include:the name of the author. A concise and informative title. The affiliation(s) of
the author(s), i.e. institution, (department), city, (state), country. A clear indication and an active e-
mail address of the corresponding author. missing 1item missing 2+ items
Running header and footer
each page has a short title and author name at the top as a header; each page is numbered at the
bottom; line numbers present missing 1item missing 2+ items
Length
minimum of 7 pages, maximum of 10 pages (excluding bibliography and supporting figures in
page count) either too short or too
long by 1/2 page length 1+ pages too long
or too short
Voice
tone and style appropriate to audience; paper displays control, variety and complexity of prose;
written in a professional manner;
occasionally uses slang; overly uses vague
adjectives (i.e. good, well)
slang use common; common use of vague descriptors/adjectives,
does not adhere to past tense
Flow
uses clear transitions that connect sentences and paragraphs; each paragraph has a topic sentence
(typically the first sentence of each paragraph); Funnel-like flow (start with big opening then
proceeding to narrower and narrower). End each section (and/or paragraph) with bridge to subsequent
subtopic (and/or paragraph)
flow somewhat disjointed; lacks
consistent transitions/bridges;
some paragraphs lacking topic sentences;
stream of consciousness, lacking organization,
US English use proper grammar and punctuation, no noticeable
errors
1-3 errors in grammar or punctuation (e.g. ending sentence in preposition)
3+ errors in grammar or punctuation
Nuts&Bolts 1 inch margins on all side; 12pt Arial font; double
spaced; left-justified 1 error 2+ errors Content
Introduction
Clear rationale for paper with specific aims. gives an overview to set context. Broad overview (gives
necessary context for reader to understand your reasons for reviewing the subject and overarching
aims of review)
vague goals, logic gaps for reasoning behind
review
little reasoning given for review or logic so sparse that reader must make
logical leaps
Body, overall
The level of detail is appropriate, the number of examples justified; Support the central concepts;
advances the field; propositions clearly justified by theory and past empirical findings
could use a bit more detail or a bit less detail
for 1-2 cited studies; some logic disconnect
between paper cited and support of central concep
way too much detail given for several cited studies; too little detail
given so that the reason for several cited studies
is unknown
Conclusion
Round things up, gives the “take-home” message; emphasizes the added value of the review,
summarizes main points.
summarizes but lacks conviction, statements not quite supported by
body lacking concluding
remarks Body
Plant uses
beverages use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
biofuels use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
construction use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
dyes use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
essential oils use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
fibers use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
firewood use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
food use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
fumitory & masticory use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
insectice/herbicide
use finely detailed either in text or summary table with relevant citations given; active chemicals
described
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
medicines
use finely detailed either in text or summary table with relevant citations given; see "if medicine" section
below
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
ornaments
use finely detailed either in text or summary table with relevant citations given; images are given when
possible
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
spices use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
textiles use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking
wood use finely detailed either in text or summary table
with relevant citations given
described but not attributed to a source or broadly given without
details lacking Special considerations
impact of collecting/harvesting described with supporting citations
not described well and/or lacking citations lacking
myths/legends described with supporting citations not described well and/or
lacking citations lacking differences depending on
gender or age described with supporting citations not described well and/or
lacking citations lacking
different names described with supporting citations not described well and/or
lacking citations lacking
chemical analyses described with supporting citations not described well and/or
lacking citations lacking if medicine
what does it cure finely detailed, case studies cited when possible,
relevant citations given not described well and/or
lacking citations lacking what portion(s) of the
plant employed for each use
described in detail and included in the figure (plant pieces)
not described well and/or lacking citations lacking
how prepared
protocols for preparing and using medicine given (eg masticated and placed on surface of skin) in detail
with supporting citations not described well and/or
lacking citations lacking
active chemicals potential or scientifically studied chemicals and what
they treat detailed with relevant citations not described well and/or
lacking citations lacking
wild/cultivated how are the plants grown prior to harvest not described well and/or
lacking citations lacking
where grown does where they grow matter (shade vs sun for
example) not described well and/or
lacking citations lacking
where occurs what is the distribution like, rare, common not described well and/or
lacking citations lacking what time of year
harvested described in detail and included in the figure
(phenology) not described well and/or
lacking citations lacking case studies for medicinal uses described with supporting citations
not described well and/or lacking citations lacking
Figures
Summary table lists uses and relevant citations in a pleasing format
some items mentioned in text that are not included in the table, some uses
lack citations
well-known uses left out of table, very few
citations listed
Chemical analyses table or figure
chemical compounds listed with where collected in the plant (included in "plant pieces" figure and what
they are used for (eg pesticide) and what they do (eg paralyze autonomous nervous system)
missing information or chemicals that are
mentioned elsewhere in the paper lacking or very few given
Plant pieces figure of plant is denoted with human uses and all
indications are correct some errors in pointing out plant parts and use
figure is displeasing and lacks many of the uses mentioned in the paper
elsewhere
Phenology
figure in which plant life cycle is shown with relevant time frame of collections finely-detailed and correctly
indicated some of the collection
times are lacking
very little collection information aligned with
plant phenology
Distribution
map of where species can be found, with indication of density (is the plant rare or common), indicate
whether it is endemic map with distribution but no indication of density
map of only a small region without details
Images includes images of local peoples using the plant or
plant products
lacking local people images or not actively
using plant/plant product lacking LIterature cited
quantity at least 20 peer-reviewed journal articles used <18 total references
used all peer-reviewed
<15 references were used or some were not
peer reviewed
In-text citation Each reference was used and cited correctly within
the body of the paper
references were occasionally cited
incorrectly; occasional slip in format; in-text citation given witout
corresponding reference in bibliography
no consistency in formatting; more than
one in-text citation given witout corresponding
reference in bibliography
Bibliography
Each reference was used and cited correctly within the body of the paper. one journal format chosen and
used throughout in bibliography, matches in-text citations
1-2 errors in bibliography; one of
reference left-out of in- text citation
bibliography with 3+ formatting errors; more
than one reference failed to be cited in text
Reviewed quality
well-balanced; span age range of relevant literature (foundational paper(s) included and current papers
with current state of knowledge
lacking a few critical papers in review that
would have supported or refuted central concept
(s)
only supports central concept does not
address criticisms; does not span age range of
topic