Due tonight Environmentalists homework help
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Do you believe that environmental security is just as
important as economic and military security?
The environment is said to be secure when the naturally
available resources are safe from pollution and human
interferences and that they are able to sustain human life.
The naturally occurring resources are products of the
environment and often are the sources of livelihood for
both man and animals (Myers, 2004). Securing the
environment and protecting it from pollution is equivalent
to securing human life. Environmental factors like
weather and climate directly affect human activities which
could be sources of income. The world’s climate has over
time been affected by human activities which lead to
climate change hence significantly affecting human
activities (Myers, 2004). Economic security aims at
maintaining a sustainable economy but most often the
economy is sustained by human activities and productivity.
Interfering with the environment through pollution
therefore means interfering with the economy.
Economic insecurities will lead to criminal acts aimed and
survival therefore giving a chance for terrorism and other
external attacks. Ensuring military security also starts
from ensuring a secure environment that can sustain a
productive population (Floyd, 2008). As our nations
struggle to ensure economic and military security it is
important that they also ensure the environment is safe
from pollution since protecting the environment is as
good as protecting the world from future economic and
military problems.
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